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A87888820 - '1962-1966' aka 'The Red Album'

Post 1

Bluebottle

Entry: '1962-1966' aka 'The Red Album' - A87888820
Author: Bluebottle - U43530

Warning: only 25% of songs on this album hadn't appeared on previous compilations and/or live albums. However as the album accompanies the Blue Album it would be incomplete not to cover this album too.

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A87888820 - '1962-1966' aka 'The Red Album'

Post 2

SashaQ - happysad - Editor

Aha - the companion to the Blue Album smiley - ok Good to see this in Peer Review smiley - biggrin

"it surprised everyone to become a number three in both the UK" - is something missing there, or is it just that "both" needs deleting?

" 'Please', another of John's mother's favourite songs" - 'one' of John's mother's favourite songs?

Is it house style to say Number One, or Number 1 single? I see you use a variety here...

For house style the woo woo quote should be in single quotes rather than italics, please. Also Paul's quote about 'All my loving'(italics are needed only in blockquotes)

" Paul later performed this song, the only from With the Beatles on the album" - something missing here.

In the Eleanor Rigby section it is Farenheit 451. I think it would help if you mention what month Oldies was released.

I do recognise most of these descriptions having read your other recent compilation Entries, but like how you include interesting details that are worth mentioning for completeness smiley - ok


A87888820 - '1962-1966' aka 'The Red Album'

Post 3

Bluebottle

Thanks for all your comments - I've tweaked this to match.

Must dashsmiley - run

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