A Conversation for Haiku form - the myth of 575 in writing English haiku

intresting haiku

Post 1

pheloxi | is it time to wear a hat? |

sorry, but haiku is already edited guide.
A222922 Haiku

not in edited guide
A65297 Haiku / Renga

there is little error in the title.
Haku form - the myth of 575 in writing English haiku
should be, I think
Haiku form - the myth of 575 in writing English haiku

Haiku Challenge!!! A494291


intresting haiku

Post 2

paul t conneally

Thank you for your reply (the last bit doesn't seem to make sense (about the title) - the haiku challenge is great fun but I found it hard to find many haiku there - lots of funny short poems written in 575 format but as I said before very few of what I would call haiku.

Most are nearer to senryu than haiku.

Great fun though and very inventive!

short sleeves and stars
a drunken old man
gives me a kiss

paul conneally


intresting haiku

Post 3

Hoovooloo

The last bit (which you said doesn't make sense) is pointing out you've misspelled "Haiku" in the title - you have it as "Haiku". thass all...

H.


intresting haiku

Post 4

Hoovooloo

Arse. Now that doesn't make sense.

it should be "Haiku". You've got it as "Haku". No "i". That really is all.

H.


intresting haiku

Post 5

paul t conneally

aha! thanks! Changed it now!

morning haze
my head has become
last night's pillow

paul conneally smiley - smiley


intresting haiku

Post 6

FrancisAlbertCorneilius

haiku or haku?
its harder to write them well
if cold grips your hands


intresting haiku

Post 7

FrancisAlbertCorneilius

five seven five form.
seasons like winter include
a deeper meaning.


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