h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Hey!

My name is Isaac and I'm going to be subbing your entry! I'll probably be pretty fast and dirty with it, so if there is anything you would like to change or edit, please let me know.

I'll give you a wrap up of any changes I made right before or right after I return it to the editors and if there is any last minute changes that you would like, we can work together with the editors on it.

Thanks!

Isaac.

Actually, I'm pretty much ready to go on it.

I added reference to three guide entries (Baton Rouge, New Orleans, and Lousianna, USA).

I moved the Bucket Brigade link up into the text of the entry.

I capitalized the "is" in "What Is Being Done".

I removed the word "here" from the second sentence.

I changed the word "Links" to "Additional Information"

I added to SUBHEADERS under "Additional Information": "Opposing Views" and "Supporting Views".

I added three links to "Additional Information" section. One additional opposing view, a letter from the Chlorine Chemistry Council. I added two to the supporting views, one an article called "Touring Cancer Alley" .. and one a pretty disturbing picture of the factories pumping polution into the sky.

I am going to go ahead and submit this. From what I understand, there is a decent backup of entries, so if you need any changes, feel free to drop me a note on my page or you can email me at [email protected]

Thanks!

Isaac.

thanks a lot, i'm okay with the changes. i appreciate your letting me know. great! i'll look forward to seeing it up.

Thanks!

And thank you for the opportunity to view your work!

Isaac.

why, you're welcome!