A Conversation for Pollution Detection - the Case of the Garfield Telephones

Peer Review: A87935188 - Pollution Detection - the Case of the Garfield Telephones

Post 1

SashaQ - happysad

Entry: Pollution Detection - the Case of the Garfield Telephones - A87935188
Author: SashaQ - happysad - U9936370

I saw this news item recently, and thought it deserved a Guide Entry


A87935188 - Pollution Detection - the Case of the Garfield Telephones

Post 2

minorvogonpoet

This reminds me of the story of a consignment of plastic ducks, which ended up being distributed over much of the world.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Friendly_Floatees

The story sounds funny, but is just one example of man made objects polluting the ocean. smiley - smiley


A87935188 - Pollution Detection - the Case of the Garfield Telephones

Post 3

Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor

smiley - cheersgood Entry
I wonder if there should be 1-2 more general sentences about pollution of the ocean through plastic/lost cargo?


A87935188 - Pollution Detection - the Case of the Garfield Telephones

Post 4

Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

You beat me to this one. smiley - roflsmiley - applause I saw a discussion on Twitter over the weekend. I'd never seen a Garfield telephone before, thank Zarquon.

I wonder if we could manage to get a photo? They're really quite horrible to look upon.

I agree with Tav, maybe a tiny bit more about pollution and ocean currents?


A87935188 - Pollution Detection - the Case of the Garfield Telephones

Post 5

SashaQ - happysad

Thanks for reading everyone smiley - biggrin

I updated the introduction and added a couple of headers so I hope that's better smiley - ok

It would be good if we could get a photo - 'Garfield telephone' sounds cute, and indeed it can be, but 'Garfield telephone that has spent 30 years in water' is 'really quite horrible to look upon' indeed!


A87935188 - Pollution Detection - the Case of the Garfield Telephones

Post 6

Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

smiley - ok Very nice.


A87935188 - Pollution Detection - the Case of the Garfield Telephones

Post 7

Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor

smiley - smiley very good addition


A87935188 - Pollution Detection - the Case of the Garfield Telephones

Post 8

Recumbentman

Good article!


A87935188 - Pollution Detection - the Case of the Garfield Telephones

Post 9

bobstafford

Well done interesting articlesmiley - cheers


Congratulations - Your Entry has been Recommended for the Edited Guide!

Post 10

h2g2 auto-messages

Your Guide Entry has just been picked from Peer Review by one of our Scouts, and is now heading off into the Editorial Process, which ends with publication in the Edited Guide. We've moved this Review Conversation out of Peer Review and to the entry itself.

If you'd like to know what happens now, check out the page on 'What Happens after your Entry has been Recommended?' at EditedGuide-Process. We hope this explains everything.

Thanks for contributing to the Edited Guide!


Congratulations - Your Entry has been Recommended for the Edited Guide!

Post 11

SashaQ - happysad

Thanks everyone! smiley - biggrin


Congratulations - Your Entry has been Recommended for the Edited Guide!

Post 12

Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

smiley - applausesmiley - cat


Congratulations - Your Entry has been Recommended for the Edited Guide!

Post 13

Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor

Congratulations! smiley - bubbly


Congratulations - Your Entry has been Recommended for the Edited Guide!

Post 14

Recumbentman

One curiosity--is "a man and his brother" a long way of saying "two brothers"?

Congratulations! Excellent Entry.


Congratulations - Your Entry has been Recommended for the Edited Guide!

Post 15

Bluebottle

Isn't it an old counting song about smiley - dog in the meadow?

smiley - whistlesmiley - musicalnoteOne man went to phone
smiley - whistlesmiley - musicalnoteWent to phone a Garfield
smiley - whistlesmiley - musicalnoteOne man and his brother
smiley - whistlesmiley - musicalnoteWent to phone a Garfield.

smiley - whistlesmiley - musicalnoteTwo men went to phone
smiley - whistlesmiley - musicalnoteWent to phone a Garfield
smiley - whistlesmiley - musicalnoteTwo men and their brother
smiley - whistlesmiley - musicalnoteWent to phone a Garfield.

<BB<


Congratulations - Your Entry has been Recommended for the Edited Guide!

Post 16

SashaQ - happysad

smiley - laugh Great song! smiley - whistlesmiley - musicalnote

Thanks Recumbentman smiley - biggrin Good point - I think I was specifying that the witness was 'a man' but he found the container with his brother. 'He and his brother' would read better, so that's a note for the Sub-editor in due course smiley - biggrin


Key: Complain about this post