h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: people in the sky. - A10809894
Author: aceblack - U3323827

hi id like to submit my People in the sky. Its all about inuit mythology.ido hope you get some pleasure reading even if it dosent get anyware ive enjoyed writing it.

Hi aceblack
I suppose this is your first entry to PR? I think it has great potential, but it needs a lot more work before it could become accepted. It's a bit brief and breathless at the moment, and really needs some fleshing-out to do this subject justice.

How about a structure where you broke the entry down into sections, each about a particular mythical figure, and wrote about those in greater detail?

Regards
FM Scout

PS: if you feel you might need some help the try the Writing-Workshop where you can knock an entry into shape before submitting it.

hi yep its my first attempt so any thing you can suggest will be GREATFULLY recieved anybody want a nosy cat that likes to do salsa dance on keyboard.

had one of them a while ago.

ace, this has loads of potential and is a wonderful read Why not take a look at some of the other Mythology Entries in the Edited Guide here: C26 to give you some pointers

This might help too - <./>GuideML-Clinic</.> It gives you instructions on how to add paragraphs, headers and all sorts of things to make your article look even better

MJ

Hi aceblack,

This is a fascinating entry. Please keep working on it. If you follow the suggestions from FM and MJ above, you will be able to improve this to a level where it can be picked for the Guide.

If there is anything you need help with, just ask us here and we will do everything possible to help you.

I am looking forward to seeing lots more from you. You ahev a huge repertoire of information that will be fantastic in the EditedGuide.



Wilma

hi, still working on this ?

Aceblack hasn't posted since Apr 24

Hi all. I'm Aceblack's ACE - there was a problem with their account, they had to set up a new one. I'll pop over their to remind them about this!

Hi im lost in a big black hole waiting to be spat out ha ha

Good to see you back! Hope all is well now?
W

Hi w yep im glad to be located again but between me and you i dont know weher ive been maybe a paralels universe haha but thanks to Lils detective work and Elentares id still be lost however thanks for reply and have nice weekend.

Aceblack you need to copy this entry into a new entry on your new account and submit it to PR. I will arrange for this thread to be moved back to the entry, as you can't edit it if you have lost your login for the original account.

Added to Scout database

hi galexy you mean ive to rewrite people in the sky again and submit it to my new account its all these threads that confuse me but i appreciate the help you guys are giveing me a thousand thanks.

No, just copy & paste it into a new article.

hi now here is the 50 million dollar question how do i do that im sorry that im not computer minded you have the patience of a saint.What baffle me is these words like paste up and thread do i click on to edit or peer whatever my salsa pussy is waiting for me to get off keyboard so she can do a bit salsa dance and her golden oldie the lambarda silly sod.well if you can explain how i do what you say ill say have a lovely weekend adnd bee cool as a pussy godbless you

Hi aceblack!
Go to the entry you want to copy.
Click on text then press Control and A on your keyboard. This selects all the text.
Press Control and C, this copies the text.
Then go to write an entry, open a new entry page then press Control and V. This will paste the text into the new entry page.

See if that works


W

That's not how I do it

Try messing around with the right-button on your mouse aceblack. (That's if the hasn't chased it away, of course)

hi ill try that hopefully it should work if not it will be no fault of yours as you have been very patient and helpfull you should be out enjoying yourself having a few pina coladas however thats bold of me and maybe i deserve a telling off nevermind its a pleasure to be on this site as ive found so many lovely people who are so eager to help so ill try what you suggest but you have a lovely weekend in the sun and b e cool as a pussy godbless and thankyoy hope to hear from you again.