A Conversation for Nelson, New Zealand

Peer Review: A5542832 - Nelson, New Zealand

Post 1

angusware

Entry: Nelson, New Zealand - A5542832
Author: angusww - U1982681

just about Nelson, NZ...travel guide type thing.


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Post 2

There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho

This is really rather good. Thank you for *not* writing another 'The best thing about my home town is the road out of it' entry, which so many first-time Researchers seem to think is just what h2g2 needs and has never been done before smiley - headhurts

One thing guaranteed to brass off several people though - me included - is 'it's' and 'its'.

it's - abbreviation of 'it is'
its - belonging to it


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Post 3

Cardi

Interesting article but with one big glaring omission I'm sure.

It's called Nelson after Lord Horatio Nelson of HMS victory fame, especially with the main street called Trafalger. You've not explained why Britain most famous sea lord has had a town in New Zealand named after him though. smiley - ermsmiley - ok


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Post 4

DrMatt

Don't know if you mentioned that it has the most sunshine hours per year of any city in NZ (although the last time I went there, there was a flash floodsmiley - wah)

Matt


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Post 5

angusware

hey, me too. either they have heaps of flash floods, or, we were there at the same time. was this early this year?


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Post 6

DrMatt

Nah, it was ages ago.


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Post 7

angusware

gee, flash floods must be kinda frequent then...


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Post 8

Sea Change

The dollar sign ($) stands for many currencies. It's worth mentioning if this is a local one.


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Post 9

Smij - Formerly Jimster

Are you still working on this? It's looking very good. One thing I would suggest though is losing all the bold tags. They're really not necessary and tend to make entries look a bit messy.

I agree that this is a refreshingly positive approach to the place - well done!


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Post 10

Baryonic Being - save GuideML out of a word-processor: A7720562

I hope this doesn't have to be consigned to the Flea Market...

There are some suggestions here to work with. Myself, I don't like history, but a general entry about a place ought to include it; otherwise you might change the title so that it reflects the fact that it is just a travel guide for tourists of today.


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Post 11

AlexAshman


I think this'll have to go to the Flea Market - the author seems to have gone and the entry isn't up to scratch.


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Post 12

echomikeromeo

I think I have to agree.


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Post 13

AlexAshman


Added to list.


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Post 14

U168592

And I'm more than happy to rescue it at some point smiley - winkeye


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Post 15

Mina

Is it on its way to the FM? We have a willing rescuer standing by. smiley - bigeyes


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Post 16

U168592

*dangles a rope*

And I think one DrMatt would probably like to contribute too smiley - biggrin


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Post 17

Mina

I'll add it to my list. I think Alex is off for christmas.


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