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Bluebottle Started conversation Apr 5, 2018
Entry: The Ultimate Illumination Entertainment Film Guide: 2010-2014 - A87899161
Author: Bluebottle - U43530
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A87899161 - The Ultimate Illumination Entertainment Film Guide: 2010-2014
SashaQ - happysad Posted Apr 11, 2018
I'm pleased to see this Entry, and think it's a good idea for you to put this here rather than in Peer Review just yet as it still gives chance for reviews, and will hopefully mean the Entry gets a smooth ride through Peer Review in due course so that it can make its way into the Edited Guide promptly
The Chris Meledandri paragraph contains a lot of 'oversee's and I'm not sure I know what they all mean - might be possible to rephrase one or two...
" while the Mac Guff continues as an independent visual effects house" - 'the Mac Guff'?
Hop is a film I'd only vaguely heard of - sounds fascinating
There are a few typos that you might spot as it is a while since you first wrote this but if you would like me to give it a thorough readthrough to help the Sub-editor in due course, let me know
I enjoyed reading it today, as I have seen 50% of the films included in the Entry
A87899161 - The Ultimate Illumination Entertainment Film Guide: 2010-2014
Bluebottle Posted Apr 11, 2018
I made a couple of tweaks but you're right, it could do with a polish and the opening is a bit weak.
I'm afraid you've just missed 'Hop' – it was on the telly a couple of weeks ago, on Easter Sunday I believe, but I don't think it is likely to be shown on TV again until Easter next year. It is okay but definitely their weakest film; there are much better animated films out there.
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