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Peer Review: A4279142 - Cosmic Cantina
D_Cole Started conversation Jun 26, 2005
Entry: Cosmic Cantina - A4279142
Author: D_Cole - U1654698
I believe this meets the guidelines well...
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Felonious Monk - h2g2s very own Bogeyman Posted Jun 26, 2005
This reads like a remarkably uncritical piece, possibly even an advertisement. Do you have any interest in this establishment?
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Pdmatthew - Probably In a corner somewhere with a guitar Posted Jun 26, 2005
Yea you certainly praise it a little too much, you should tone down the praise, remember these things have to be objective
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D_Cole Posted Jun 27, 2005
Does it really matter if I have interest in the establishment? I mean, it's an informational entry related to another. I'll admit it may not merit the edited guide, but I felt it was noteworthy at least.
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Felonious Monk - h2g2s very own Bogeyman Posted Jun 27, 2005
Yes, it *does* matter, because you would be *advertising*, and the BBC doesn't do *any* advertising, and it's *disingenuous* anyway to present an advertisement as an objective appraisal.
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Paully Posted Aug 23, 2005
So, is there any way to have a go at re-writing this article in a more neutral fashion, D_Cole?
What are the bad points about the venue? Does it get over-crowded? What other alternatives are there nearby? What items wouldn't you recommend? Are there any particular architectural features of the Cantina that make it stand out from other similar places?
All of these kind of things would make this entry more likely to be suitable for inclusion in the Edited Guide...!
Paully
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Skankyrich [?] Posted Oct 24, 2005
Anyone care to second a back to entry motion?
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There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho Posted Oct 24, 2005
Here.
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Peer Review: A4279142 - Cosmic Cantina
- 1: D_Cole (Jun 26, 2005)
- 2: Felonious Monk - h2g2s very own Bogeyman (Jun 26, 2005)
- 3: Pdmatthew - Probably In a corner somewhere with a guitar (Jun 26, 2005)
- 4: D_Cole (Jun 27, 2005)
- 5: Felonious Monk - h2g2s very own Bogeyman (Jun 27, 2005)
- 6: Paully (Aug 23, 2005)
- 7: Skankyrich [?] (Oct 24, 2005)
- 8: There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho (Oct 24, 2005)
- 9: Skankyrich [?] (Oct 24, 2005)
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