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Collaborative Writing Workshop: A3809009 - The Supermarine Spitfire

Post 1

megajamesblonde

Entry: The Supermarine Spitfire - A3809009
Author: megajamesblonde - U1406152

Hi I am just beginning this and would like some feedback. If anyone had the time it wuld be much appreciated.
Thanks


A3809009 - The Supermarine Spitfire

Post 2

Jimi X

I haven't gone through them all, but some of the Edited Entries over at WW2 People's War are rather good. Some interesting first-hand accounts and other tidbits.
http://www.bbc.co.uk/dna/ww2/Search?searchstring=Spitfire&searchtype=ARTICLE&showapproved=1

You could also check out some other h2g2 Edited Entries:
A733565 - Behind the Battle of Britain
A891128 - A Hurricane from Hawkers
A902486 - The Mustang Aircraft - a Long-legged Fighter

They're pretty good and give you an idea as to the style.

Best of luck with it!

smiley - cheers
- Jimi X


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