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Peer Review: A2833751 - The Duct Tape Cure for Warts
lepoulet Started conversation Jul 13, 2004
Entry: The Duct Tape Cure for Warts - A2833751
Author: lepoulet - U783323
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A2833751 - The Duct Tape Cure for Warts
Speller - If I can help somebody... Posted Jul 13, 2004
Excellent entry I can’t wait to try it – a must have for all first aid kits! I hope this entry is seriously considered for the guide. I like your writing style. My only thought is that maybe the introduction could be a little longer and more general in its opening? Something … oh I don’t know something like “Are you troubled by warts? You know those irritating …???????” anyway it’s your entry!
Nick
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Woodpigeon Posted Jul 13, 2004
Hello lepoulet,
And welcome to H2G2. I hope you find our community a welcoming place for sharing your thoughts with us. H2G2 can be somewhat daunting at first but with a little bit of perseverance (and plenty of lurking) you'll get used to it!
Peer Review is the system we use to turn guide entries into Edited Guide entries - these entries will appear on the front page of H2G2, and form part of what is known as the Official Guide. Entries that pass certain conditions defined in our Writing-Guidelines section, and which take into account the views of reviewers such as myself will eventually be selected from Peer Review and turned into Edited Guide entries.
Your first entry to Peer Review is very useful and informative, however you have written it in such a way that it does not meet the Writing-Guidelines at this time. The only main issue is that it is written in the first person - "I", has one or two personal theories and probably needs a little more fleshing out in terms of the research findings that you mention.
You still have the bones of a good article here! Your first paragraph is mostly fine, your section on the process is spot on, and your conclusion is fine too. Can you find anything else out about what is known about the duct tape method? Can you re-examine the bits where you have written about your own experience? What can work is to put a section titled "A Researcher's Experience" at the end of your entry.
I hope this helps and I look forward to seeing this develop into a potential Edited Guide entry.
Take care,
Woodpigeon
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Dr Hell Posted Jul 14, 2004
Very nice Entry. And I suspect it works well. Also, the first-person bits have been corrected! Way to go! A valuable addition to the Guide IMO.
HELL
PS: I had some ten viral warts on the palm of my left hand. The medical solution did not work. So, one day I put my hand under running water and *shaved* the warts off, I left the bleeding hand in the water until no more blood was visible (I had heard that the blood contains viruses, and that they might infect other parts) - the warts never came back, and my hand still looks healthy.
A2833751 - The Duct Tape Cure for Warts
Woodpigeon Posted Jul 14, 2004
Yes, this is a big improvement! Well done!
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Felonious Monk - h2g2s very own Bogeyman Posted Jul 14, 2004
"So, one day I put my hand under running water and *shaved* the warts off"
I did have a rather nasty verruca on my foot once, so I went to the doctor who prescribed some expensive lotion. I was a research student, and couldn't afford this, so I pointed out to the doctor that I had access to a chemical lab. 'Aha!', he said, 'try glacial acetic acid. When it starts hurting, it's time to stop'. So I took a bottle of the stuff home with me, dabbed it on each day, and it completely destroyed the thing.
The other do-it-yourself cure I have heard of is for cold sores. A colleague came home from work one day with an awful cold sore. His young daughter took one look at it and said: 'instant coffee powder. That's what all the kids use at school'.
So he tried it, and it worked. No more cold sore.
I think I ought to stop here as I don't think it's very wise to go around encouraging do-it-yourself medial procedures...
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Pimms Posted Jul 14, 2004
Great entry
Possibly worth providing including a link to corroborate the facts eg http://www.cbc.ca/stories/2002/10/15/duct_tape021015
http://www.diagnose-me.com/cond/C199025.html or http://www.jyi.org/volumes/volume7/issue5/features/demichele.html
but you already cover the information adequately and mention the original source, so this may be unnecessary.
Pimms
(Don't forget to write a brief introduction to your space)
A2833751 - The Duct Tape Cure for Warts
lepoulet Posted Jul 14, 2004
Yes, acetic and salicylic acids are what's in those over-the-counter Compound-W type medicines. But I had a rather unsuccessful experience with the OTCs--stings like all hell. I have a low threshold for pain .
In other news, I've added in a section on what exactly a wart is--let me know if it works.
Signing off,
Le poulet en colere
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There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho Posted Jul 14, 2004
This is just the kind of entry we need in the EG Still needs some work though (don't they all ).
British spelling throughout please:
Pediatrics - Paediatrics
theorize - theorise
skepticism - scepticism
The first header (Introduction) is unnecessary.
Each and every paragraph should be enclosed within a ... tag. tags are only used for things like quotes.
'Researcher' is an h2g2 title, just like Scout, Sub-editor, Community Artist, or even Staff, so it should capitalised.
"They commonly grown on the face"
'They commonly grow on the face'
debride - to surgically excise from a wound or lesion. I don't think 'debride' is the right word to use in this instance. Maybe you were thinking of abrade?
"bottoms of her feet"
'bottom of her feet'
"around quarter-size"
Quarter what - inch? Centimetre? Foot?
awhile - a while
Scout
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Milos Posted Jul 15, 2004
Informative entry, nicely written, on the whole a commendable first effort .
I'd be interested in hearing more about this cold sore/coffee grounds quackery . Care to write an entry, Felonious?
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Felonious Monk - h2g2s very own Bogeyman Posted Jul 17, 2004
I don't think I have enough to back an entry up apart from this one example, which happened years ago. What I would say is that if anyone suffers from cold sores, they might try clobbering one with coffee powder to see if it works.
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Felonious Monk - h2g2s very own Bogeyman Posted Jul 17, 2004
http://www.geocities.com/allergylifeline/010.html
This mentions the coffee entry. Unless you are really skint, I'd go out and buy some Zovirax were I you.
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Secretly Not Here Any More Posted Jul 17, 2004
Sounds better than my method. The one wart I had I hacked out with a knife. Bled for an hour, hurt like buggery, but it never grew back!
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Pimms Posted Aug 16, 2004
Hi lepoulet
Noted a minor adjustment that you could address:
'Introduction' header is not needed - usually Edited Guide entries have an unheaded introductory paragraph following the title, no header needed until the main sections of the entry.
Pimms
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Pimms Posted Aug 16, 2004
...there are also a few typos (scapleled>scalpeled, detatches>detaches)
There could be an issue with this entry, as it could be seen as giving medical advice, something that the BBC try and steer clear of. I can't see it myself, as it appears a fairly objective review of the research and its effectiveness, with sensible caveats about using the technique without professional advice. It is not really much different from any entry reviewing surprising research.
There are many sites detailing the research (try a google on any two of Focht, wart, pediatric) Possibly links to more of these are needed
Pimms
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There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho Posted Aug 16, 2004
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anhaga Posted Aug 16, 2004
I'm sad to report that the Duct Tape Cure for Warts didn't manage to cure the wart on my right foot.
It did make the skin under the tape really squishy and kind of moist in a not wholly pleasant way. And now a while after abandoning the tape the skin is kind of dry and flaky. And the wart is still there.
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Felonious Monk - h2g2s very own Bogeyman Posted Aug 22, 2004
I'm not happy with the entry for the reason that it does give medical advice. This sort of advice, for legal reasons at least, should come only from a qualified medic NOT a lay person.
Anyway, seeing as the author hasn't posted for 4 weeks, how about a move back to entry?
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Pimms Posted Aug 22, 2004
OK, re-reading it it does come over a bit strongly in favour of the efficacy of the cure. The credentials of the cure are there to be checked out on the web, but since lepoulet isn't there to argue the corner for this entry I'll second the move to entry. people can still read the Guide entry and make their own minds up.
Pimms
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Peer Review: A2833751 - The Duct Tape Cure for Warts
- 1: lepoulet (Jul 13, 2004)
- 2: Speller - If I can help somebody... (Jul 13, 2004)
- 3: Woodpigeon (Jul 13, 2004)
- 4: Dr Hell (Jul 14, 2004)
- 5: Woodpigeon (Jul 14, 2004)
- 6: Felonious Monk - h2g2s very own Bogeyman (Jul 14, 2004)
- 7: Pimms (Jul 14, 2004)
- 8: lepoulet (Jul 14, 2004)
- 9: There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho (Jul 14, 2004)
- 10: Milos (Jul 15, 2004)
- 11: Felonious Monk - h2g2s very own Bogeyman (Jul 17, 2004)
- 12: Felonious Monk - h2g2s very own Bogeyman (Jul 17, 2004)
- 13: Secretly Not Here Any More (Jul 17, 2004)
- 14: Pimms (Aug 16, 2004)
- 15: Dr Hell (Aug 16, 2004)
- 16: Pimms (Aug 16, 2004)
- 17: There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho (Aug 16, 2004)
- 18: anhaga (Aug 16, 2004)
- 19: Felonious Monk - h2g2s very own Bogeyman (Aug 22, 2004)
- 20: Pimms (Aug 22, 2004)
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