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Subbing Titchfield Haven
Bluebottle Started conversation Apr 16, 2017
A87887696 Titchfield Haven National Nature Reserve, Hampshire, UK
Hello, I'll be subbing the above when I'm back from holiday
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Bluebottle Posted Apr 20, 2017
Would you like to define what a 'Hide' is, for people who haven't been bird-watching before? I think a footnote would perhaps be useful.
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SashaQ - happysad Posted Apr 20, 2017
Yes - how about? "Once you enter the Haven, the hidesWooden structures with narrow windows that enable you to see the birds without disturbing them."
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Bluebottle Posted Apr 20, 2017
Excellent! Although now I'm wondering about 'scrapes'
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Bluebottle Posted Apr 20, 2017
I've been cut-off mid-sentence!
Although now I'm wondering about 'scrapes' and think perhaps the definition should be moved up to where they're first mentioned.
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SashaQ - happysad Posted Apr 20, 2017
How about changing the first mention of "Scrapes" to "Artificial islands"?
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Bluebottle Posted Apr 20, 2017
Other than that, I think it is good to go. Would you like to read through and let me know what you think?
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