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Peer Review: A1115632 - Sun Tzu : The Art of War

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PhantomObserver

Entry: Sun Tzu : The Art of War - A1115632
Author: PhantomObserver - U232722

This is a substantial update of Merangadan's entry (A571862) which had been sitting in the Flea Market for some time. I added a bit on the book's publication history and cut down the number of quotations in favor of an outline.
Comments, as always, are welcome.


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David Conway

A fascinating read. smiley - ok

One minor issue, though... In the opening paragraph, the dating give a year as being BCE. The rest of the entry gives dating as BC or AD. Either that BCE should be changed to BC or all of the other dates should be changed to BCE or CE.

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Post 3

PhantomObserver

All right. I've got that fixed. Thanks for the tip.


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Post 4

David Conway

That really was all I could come up with by way of critical comment. Looking good! smiley - cheers

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Post 5

xyroth

you could mention that this is downloadable from project gutenberg.

http://www.gutenberg.net/


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Otto Fisch ("Stop analysing Strava.... and cut your hedge")


This looks very good indeed - always great to see good things coming back from the Flea Market smiley - smiley

Otto


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Phoenician Trader

This is a really good entry on a widely quoted and, I suspect, unread book. It is amazing to get such a good feel for a book from so few words.

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Post 8

Spiff


hear, hear! smiley - ok

Great stuff. Nothing to say on style or content, a couple of humbly submitted typos for you:

"This wass a similar state of affairs to the Sengoku period in Japan."

and a mis-typed 'espionage' in the last para. smiley - smiley

see you on the Front Page
spiff


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Post 9

Zarquon's Singing Fish!

I've read it, but not for a while! smiley - smiley

My favourite part was the little story that went about being faced with overwhelming odds in a siege, where the strategy was to open the gates and appear to want the enemy to come in. The enemy didn't - suspecting a trick/trap. The enemy believed there was a much stronger force than there was. Must find the book and have a look. smiley - run

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Post 10

PhantomObserver

Typos have been corrected -- thanks for pointing them out!


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Jimi X

Not much to say other than smiley - ok

smiley - cheers
- Jimi X


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McKay The Disorganised

Excellent. smiley - ok


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pedboy

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David Conway

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