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Prof.Burnham

Entry: Prof. Burhnham's Student - The Life Game of Pool - A989706
Author: Researcher 220957 - U220957

Prof Burnham's student - please critique!


A989706 - Prof. Burhnham's Student - The Life Game of Pool

Post 2

SomeMuppet

This has potential but another of Prof Burnhams students who posted and ran.

I would propose FM for this one


A989706 - Prof. Burhnham's Student - The Life Game of Pool

Post 3

a girl called Ben

Personally, I think it is c**p, but I would suggest leaving it here.
Just because I think it is weak, doesn't mean other people won't like it. I don't play pool, you see.

It is articulate, and makes a couple of interesting suggestions, and other people might like to read it. Though you can tell I won't defend it strongly if someone seconds KJ's proposal.

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A989706 - Prof. Burhnham's Student - The Life Game of Pool

Post 4

nadia

I found this dull. Technically the writing is fine but it has no spark at all. It shows that it was written without enthusiasm for a class project.

Suggesting a move.
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A989706 - Prof. Burhnham's Student - The Life Game of Pool

Post 5

Spynxxx

a real sleeping aid

seconded


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