A Conversation for The Wit & Wisdom of Ralph Wiggum

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BenniBi

Hello!

A few suggestions for your article.

First of all, the very first thing I picked up upon was the fact that you have spelt chief wrong when saying "police chief Wiggum"

Secondly, you could, I feel, go further by explaining how some of the quotes you have given us can be contrived to show pearls of wisdom from the Ralph-meister himself.

On the whole, short and sweet as well as a good structure. In my mind, it needs a few tweaks though.

BenniBi smiley - smiley


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