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EF: Alfred Hitchcock

Post 1

Rudest Elf


Entry ID: A2984051 (Edited)

film-makers

heavy, and

tenure that he took

film-making talents

Eventually, Hitchcock

in the same year

Balcon that this

were well received

was viewed

his film-making

script, he filmed

bored with it;

contemporary film-making

successful use; hence

In Psycho, Hitchcock

continued without

Lifeboat (1944), Rope (1948), Rear Window (1954)

and film-maker.

both actresses [....] had

onto the set,

best-laid plans

lifeboat'.

businessman

. The fact that he gave

into the theatre

had already started

in advance, Hitchcock

scriptwriter Ernest

<'Alma loved it.'> 'Alma loved it'.

actress, Kelly

Is the match with the movie title good enough reason to use italics here?

Worlds, a Halloween


smiley - reindeer








EF: Alfred Hitchcock

Post 2

U695218

Never awarded an Oscarsmiley - wah: scandalous (and no, that's not the name of a lost Hitchcock film).


EF: Alfred Hitchcock

Post 3

Gnomon - time to move on

I'll do these changes.


EF: Alfred Hitchcock

Post 4

Gnomon - time to move on

Thanks, Elf. I've done all your suggested changes exactly, except for two where I used slightly different versions, as follows:

Hitchcock was exceptionally prolific for a time when cameras were big, equipment heavy and cumbersome productions were measured in months rather than hours.
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Hitchcock was exceptionally prolific for a time when cameras were big, equipment heavy and cumbersome, and productions were measured in months rather than hours.

Former model and stage actress Kelly starred in three consecutive hits
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A former model and stage actress, Kelly starred in three consecutive hits

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EF: Alfred Hitchcock

Post 5

Rudest Elf


Thanks, Gnomon. smiley - cheers

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