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Post 21

pedboy

Thank you Friar, I have made the changes as you have suggested. Muchly appreciated.

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A967575 - Multiple Sclerosis

Post 22

pedboy

I have done some more tweaking , and corrected a few mis-spellings. I have also asked a few fellow MS patients to look at it, and edit it for any mistakes I may have made about MS itself.
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A967575 - Multiple Sclerosis

Post 23

Friar


looks good!

last thing: you do not need to capitalize corticosteroids


A967575 - Multiple Sclerosis

Post 24

pedboy

I have made all the exhaustive changes as per your request(hehe) smiley - smiley . Now can I, take a break...
pedboy U200417
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Post 25

Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide!

It's definitely OK to take a break now and then. You've done a superb job of responding to everyone's comments here.

People may stop by with more comments for you still, but you don't need to feel like you have to act on them instantaneously -- if you can get to them in a day or so, or even in a week or so, people tend to be pretty understanding around here.

Have some smiley - tea and some smiley - choc -- they make for a good break. smiley - ok

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Mikey


A967575 - Multiple Sclerosis

Post 26

Friar

Just wanted to thank you for your attention to this article, it's turning out great.

Also wanted to let you know that when I'm following a nice article I post at least once every day to keep it toward the top of the peer review page so that it gets greater attention. Maybe it's a little unfair, but good work deserves the attention!

Friar


A967575 - Multiple Sclerosis

Post 27

pedboy

Thak you Friar , I put a bit of code into it. I am using the same technique as you have stated...(squeeky wheel theory)

pedboy U200417
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A967575 - Multiple Sclerosis

Post 28

pedboy

Title?- I was thinking about something like "Multiple Sclerosis for Dummies" like the self-help book series...
pedboy U200417


A967575 - Multiple Sclerosis

Post 29

pedboy

Would that cause any infringements on the ".....for Dummies" publishing company?
pedboy U200417


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Post 30

Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide!

I believe I'd stay away from that one, as I think there are some trademarks involved....

Mikey


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Post 31

Friar

I agree, making light of horrible illness is more bad than good. How about, "A Funny Thing Happened on the Way to the Immunologists"


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Post 32

Z

I'm taking a break from scouting for a couple of months, however I remember that one of my tutours told me that he found that people with MS are usually better at dealing with it emotionally, that people with other equally sever disease..


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Post 33

pedboy

I understand where you both are coming from. In my case it would not bother me at all(name and making light of), but I do wish to respect those who have not reached the stage of "acceptance" that I have.
So, leave it alone.
pedboy U200417
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Post 35

Friar

congrats!


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Post 36

pedboy

thank you Friar


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