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Edited Guide Writing Workshop: A9433604 - Ghana *WIP*

Post 1

Wilma Neanderthal

Entry: Ghana *WIP* - A9433604
Author: Wilma Neanderthal - Got a PR peeve? Go to A9741972: The Nearly but Not Quite 'Official' PR Discussion Forum - U2192551

I have worked on this quite a bit and I've got loads more to say. Although there are still gaps, my biggest struggle is with the potential length of the entry. If I keep going on like this, it will be submitted to the CIA factbook smiley - online2long. Please help smiley - grovel

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Gnomon - time to move on

That's only 2,000 words, Wilma. I've written entries up to 5,000 words and they have been well received. The editors can always split it into two later if it is too big.


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Post 3

Wilma Neanderthal

Thank you, Gnomon. I will plough on then. smiley - smiley
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Post 4

echomikeromeo

This looks good to me, Wilma!smiley - biggrin

I would suggest adding a little more to the history section, though. Your history seems to leave off a little early, and I'd like to see it connected to the present day. How was Ghana affected by imperialism, and how did it become an independent country?

Just a small suggestion.smiley - smiley


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Post 5

Wilma Neanderthal

smiley - cheers EMR,

Monday. I'll start up on this properly on Monday. I promise.

smiley - winkeye

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Post 6

Skankyrich [?]

Our 'Devon's Towns and Countryside' entry was considerably longer than this, Wilma - and it was just about one county smiley - smileyA8671980

And my Midnight Oil entry - far longer than this - was about just one band A3577232. I wouldn't worry about the length, if I were you!


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Post 7

Wilma Neanderthal

smiley - cheers Skanky!
Welcome back, btw smiley - winkeye
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Post 8

Wilma Neanderthal

History section updated. I hope it is ok. Chan you let me know what you think, EMR?

I am still working on the Scouting section and have not even started on Tourism yet...
smiley - cheers

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Post 9

echomikeromeo

Much better, Wilma!smiley - ok

fiecre --> fierce
leadng --> leading

US$1 billion --> $1 billion US looks better, though you may need to have the figure in pounds.

You also might want to run spellcheck to see that you don't have any more typos.smiley - smiley


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Post 10

Wilma Neanderthal

Thanks EMR, I will get those and do my spell check when I'm through with the rest of the entry. Still ploughing through tourism at the moment smiley - biggrin
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Post 11

Wilma Neanderthal

Updated, rejigged and written. Does anyone think this is about ready for PR?
smiley - biggrin
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Post 12

echomikeromeo

Go for it!smiley - ok


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Post 13

Skankyrich [?]

Goodness - a Researcher *asking* if something is ready for PR??? When I've picked myself up and dusted myself off, I'll tell you to go for it!


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Post 14

Wilma Neanderthal

smiley - cross what have I done wrong now?
smiley - wah


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Post 15

Wilma Neanderthal

smiley - biggrin

*hoists entry on her back*

smiley - run to PR


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