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Peer Review: A891551 - The Wall - A Marathon Runner's Nightmare

Post 1

Trout Montague

Entry: The Wall - A Marathon Runner's Nightmare - A891551
Author: Dr Montague Trout - U188966

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Found this in Flea Market

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Tried to stay true to original and absorb previous threads mutatis mutandis

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Hope I have credtied all involved

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DMT


A891551 - The Wall - A Marathon Runner's Nightmare

Post 2

Bon Mambo

Looks good, ceteris paribus


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Post 3

Otto Fisch ("Stop analysing Strava.... and cut your hedge")


Nil Status Nisi Optinum

I like this! Perhaps it concludes a little suddenly? I'm not sure and can't think of any alternative suggestions....

Otto


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Post 4

Witty Ditty

Hiya!

I like this too - I agree with Otto that the end bit is a tad abrupt... perhaps a section on 'After the Wall'? If there is such a phenomenon of course - up to you though smiley - smiley

Stay smiley - cool,
WD


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Post 5

There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho

Me neither smiley - erm

"Whilst a good habituated runner..." Perhaps that should be "well-habituated"?

A very nice entry smiley - ok


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Post 6

Trout Montague

It's got an end now. It's not much but it's a start.


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Post 7

Sho - gainfully employed again

But it got over the wall nicely

smiley - ok


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Post 8

Demon Drawer

The link is too long which part is actually the linked article.


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Post 9

Z

I do like this, I think the endings ok now but it explains the concept well and I like the tone smiley - ok

smiley - redwinesmiley - ill


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Post 10

Demon Drawer

Move the link tag so it only encloses either Khalid Khannouchi or London Marathon on April 14, 2002 as these are the main subjects of the article.


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Post 11

Trout Montague

Sub-Ed can do that?


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Post 13

Trout Montague

Sub-Ed - please credit U187885 if it ain't done already. Thanks.

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