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Post Team

Please use this thread for comments, questions, and discussions on the story 'Camelost'. This will be tidier and lead to less depression on the part of the author.

The Editor, standing in for FWR, who is currently offsite at an undisclosed location.


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Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor

Sorry, I'm afraid I already did it wrong. smiley - sadface


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Dmitri Gheorgheni - Post Editor

That's okay, just write it here! smiley - ok

I like this story, it has cinema potential.


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Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor

Oh yes, definitely!


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Dmitri Gheorgheni - Post Editor

I'll post this here for everybody to read. It's from Minorvogonpoet.

'I send my congratulations to those bold writers who are taking part in
the 'Twice Told Tales'.

I think FWR's 'Camelost' promises to be very funny,
Your 'Electrical Journey of Izzy Himmelfart' is intriguing, and I like
the ferrets!
Paul B's 'Pilgrim's Inn' has an amazing cast.
Tavaron's 'The Cosmic Adventures of Captain Edgeifsir' promises to go far!
Caiman Raptor Elk's 'Robyn Hoodie' has started as an entertaining satire.'


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Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor

smiley - hug thanks for her comments to mvp


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Post 7

Caiman raptor elk - Escaping the Array


Thanks for relaying the messages. At the moment only one out of four devices is still connected to the site as logged on. I keep my fingers crossed this one remains. (Thanks to remote desktop, I am still able to work with it)

I will point out your story to my oldest son Arthur, he may enjoy it as much as I do...


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Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor

Poor king Arthur always has a very hard time in stories.


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Caiman raptor elk - Escaping the Array


And now Merlin arises. Reminds me of the final shot of the "Merlin" series I saw on Netflix, with Merlin walking along a road being passed by a large bus. Disguising a wizard as a conjurer works well, I guess.


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Dmitri Gheorgheni - Post Editor

At least in this version he's not stuck inside a tree. smiley - laugh


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Post 11

Superfrenchie

Only now catching up with the first chapters of NaJo (better late than never!)
I like this so far, and am looking forward to reading the next bits smiley - smiley


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Post 12

Caiman raptor elk - Escaping the Array


Gwen, Lance Hallot... Nice...


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Post 13

Caiman raptor elk - Escaping the Array


Galahad, check.

I wonder if there will be taunting French people. (probably not old enough copyright wise?)


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Caiman raptor elk - Escaping the Array


Just read number 9. Flashing back and forward it appears. With added police jargon.


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Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor

Yes, this seems to be the past. Although it's the year 2021?


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Dmitri Gheorgheni - Post Editor

FWR is back but is having trouble commenting. While we work on it, he's asked me to tell everyone that he's reading the stories and enjoying them very much.


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Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor

smiley - cheers thanks, I hope the problems are resolved soon


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Caiman raptor elk - Escaping the Array


I am only hanging on to a VPN / remote desktop connection to the only device that is still logged in, So I know what FWR is going through.


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Dmitri Gheorgheni - Post Editor

I am doing the best I can to troubleshoot this issue.


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Post 20

Array

Testing DG you are a wizard!

works on PC. please dont kick me out....


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