A Conversation for House of the Morningstar: Chapter 23

Run Forrest run!

Post 1

Caiman raptor elk - Inside big box, thinking.


Nice twist in narrating perspective in the first one!

Also nice to stop running at the end of the second piece. Otherwise they would have to keep running till next week.

They must be rather deep underground by now.

I wonder if Elanor will get any remarks in the post-ops briefing about her aiming capabilities. (okay, Harry missed as well...)


Run Forrest run!

Post 2

Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor

Thank you!

It's a high building and they started running from the top. I'm not sure how many storeys they ran down.smiley - laugh
(in my original version of this part they were going upstairs but then I thought the party in the sky bar and running downstairs would be more fun)

You are right, she really has to work on her aiming!


Run Forrest run!

Post 3

Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

smiley - rofl


Run Forrest run!

Post 4

SashaQ - happysad

smiley - ok


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