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Post 1

Bagpuss

Entry: Scrubs - The TV Series - A829884
Author: Bagpuss - Lending services to Peer Review as a pedant extraordinaire - U152404

I sort of picked up A770780 without waiting for it to hit the flea market, but the author has left the building. Anyway, I'm not sure what to keep from the original - my feeling is that it could lose a few of the superlatives.

Also, I'm not sure if I should put more cast members in nor exactly how I should list them. Does the current ordered list look okay?

Any and all comments welcome.


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Post 2

Bagpuss

Don't all rush at once.


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Post 3

McKay The Disorganised

Depends where you are in the series. If you're on SKY or in the States then you know the janitor thinks he's helping JD, and Elliot really does fancy JD, and his dad is - lets not give it all away.

I think more characters are needed - especially Doc Cox's ex.


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Post 4

Bagpuss

Whoops, didn't realise anyone was here. The other points aside, I think the janitor's motivation is still unknown.

I will put in some more characters, but I suppose I'll have to work out who the actors are. Let's see, whom else should I include? Ben, Laverne, and of course Rowdy.

I'll probably do something this weekend.


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Post 5

cafram - in the states.

This show has only just started here in Australia, so I guess we're a bit behind the rest of the world...hey, what's new?! smiley - winkeye

Maybe have some sort of spoiler warning at the top - we're only in the second episode here, so a lot of the character development hasn't come out yet...I don't know how you could write the entry without including this character info, so some sort of note at the top which says something about how reading the entry could give away character info could be an idea...

smiley - erm Just a thought, anyway smiley - winkeye


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Post 6

Bagpuss

I'll bear that in mind when I get around to this. I don't think it really spoils anything after the first couple of episodes - not that you know obviously. Although one character I'll mention doesn't turn up till later.


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Post 7

cafram - in the states.

Yeah, I wasn't sure if it would have that much of an impact after the first couple of eoisodes, just something to watch out for smiley - smiley

smiley - ok


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Post 8

Bagpuss

Now I feel like I have to do something with this entry, since it's sitting there broadcasting spoilers to unsuspecting types who haven't seen Scrubs yet. Bah. smiley - winkeye


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Post 9

cafram - in the states.

smiley - laugh sorry! If you leave it a few weeks then we'll be past the parts that'd be spoiled...

That's a good excuse to put it off, isn't it?!


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Post 10

Bagpuss

Sounds good to me. Wonder which countries still have to start. See, next thing I know I'll have someone from Nepal moaning at me.


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Post 11

cafram - in the states.

smiley - laugh I sincerely doubt it!


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Post 12

Bagpuss

Well that's a relief.

By the way I will do some work on this over the Christmas holidays. Scout's honour.


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Post 13

cafram - in the states.

suuuuuure you will smiley - winkeye


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Post 14

Bagpuss

smiley - tongueout Now I'm getting insulted by people with whom I'd barely communicated before last week.


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cafram - in the states.

I'm sorry - I meant nothing by it.

Honestly smiley - winkeye


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Post 16

Bagpuss

Don't worry, it's just it normally takes people a month or so to get to that level of confidence in me.


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Post 17

cafram - in the states.

smiley - laughsmiley - laugh

I'm not sure whether confidence in you is the right turn of phrase...maybe confidence in your dilatory nature? smiley - winkeye


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Post 18

Bagpuss

Well, confidence or lack thereof.

I'm just about on holiday now, so we'll see when I get round to doing anything.


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Post 19

cafram - in the states.

wo norries smiley - ok

have a good holiday!


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Post 20

Bagpuss

You too.


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