h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

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I've had a look through the whole entry, and made some changes. Most are fairly minor ones, the odd sentence rearranged, or rephrased, that sort of thing. The biggest change is the paragraph on motorbikes that I've added, as I hadn't mentioned them before.

The only problem point I might have with the entry as it stands is the final paragraph, where I list the games in the series, and the formats they are released on. I haven't been able to find any ommisions here, and I've tried to be as thorough as I can, visiting a number of sites that seem comprehensive. However, if you know of any I've missed, please let me know.

Apart from that, I think the entry is ready, but would still like your comments on the entry.

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Hi Silverfish,

I'm your friendly, neighbourhood Sub-editor for this entry . You can check out how I'm butchering your brainchild at A1148186 , any complaints can be registered here - they might even be listened to , (or not, depending on how I feel at the time).

I'll be in touch before I send this onwards, or sooner if I have any queries.

Wildman

Butchering just about complete .

I'll leave the article 'til Monday - if I haven't heard anything from you by then I'll pass it on up the line.

Wildman

Hi Wildman. I just thought I'd say I fine with the changes. The only niggle I can see is from an inconsistency in the original text. I've referred to the 'score multiplier' at times, whereas at other times I've referred to the 'bonus multiplier'. Could you make sure they all read bonus multiplier, as they are the same thing. I think I've only used the former in the 'earning points' section.

Thanks

Silverfish

Silverfish,

I've changed that - but rather than changing them all to bonus multiplier, I've actually changed them all to score multiplier on the grounds that it is the score that is multiplied and not your bonuses .

I've now sent it on its way to the Editors and you should see it next on the front page in due time .

Well done!

Wildman