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Peer Review: A673012 - Middletown-Hummelstown Railroad, Pennsylvania, USA

Post 1

Jimi X

Entry: Middletown-Hummelstown Railroad, Pennsylvania, USA - A673012
Author: Jimi X - U53353

Enough already!

I've been working on this off and on (mostly off) for too long. The kids and I just took another ride on this train yesterday, so I got motivated to wrap it up.

Here it is in all its glory (or something smiley - winkeye).

smiley - cheers

- Jimi X


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Post 2

Ashley


Hey Jimi,

Another great entry on the Kystone State (I will get there one day - promise).smiley - ok

Just one suggestion - inthe list starting with the Easter Bunny express, we normally embolden the subject before the hyphen. So the GuideML would look like:

Easter Bunny Express - The Easter Bunny rides the train, poses for photos with youngsters and passes out candy.

But other than that really *tiny* point, nothing.


A673012 - Middletown-Hummelstown Railroad, Pennsylvania, USA

Post 3

Ashley



Also, as an aside, how about an entry on Jim Thorpe, PA - the man and the town? smiley - winkeye


A673012 - Middletown-Hummelstown Railroad, Pennsylvania, USA

Post 4

Zarquon's Singing Fish!

Hi Jimi!

Nice.smiley - smiley I'm pleased you got a link in to Thomas the Tank Engine. We go to a couple of steam railways who do Thomas the Tank Engine days, and they're generally really good fun. Ours have the fat controller as MC and the engines do stuff - like Diesel being naughty and stealing trucks!

Did you say how long the line was?

smiley - fishsmiley - musicalnote


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Post 5

Jimi X

Ashley: I considered making them bold, but balked for some reason. Changes coming...

And as for Jim Thorpe, I'll write about the man, but not the town. It's a really creepy story that I'll only divulge if you ask sweetly. smiley - winkeye

ZSF: It's 11 miles. If it's not in there, I'll add it now.

smiley - cheers

- X


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Post 6

Ashley


Oh divulge, please smiley - cake

I'll even give you my ribbon smiley - smiley


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Post 7

Jimi X

The town fathers of Mauch Chunk and East Mauch Chunk in Pennsylvania's 'coal regions' figured a good way to boost tourism would be to find a gimmick.

So they purchased the dead body of Jim Thorpe and erected a memorial to him outside of town and renamed the two towns 'Jim Thorpe'. He had never visited the place (except in death), but his interment there prompted a tourist boom that continues to this day...


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Post 8

Ashley


Eeuuuwww! smiley - ill


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Post 9

Jimi X

smiley - laugh

You asked for it...


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Post 10

Ashley


But that is particularly grim - smiley - erm


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Post 12

Jimi X

smiley - cheers to the Mystery Scout(tm)!

smiley - winkeye

- X


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