A Conversation for MPB

Alternative Writing Workshop: A64829965 - MPB

Post 1

sinnerman pfank

Entry: MPB - A64829965
Author: sinnerman pfank - U9260985


evening

so many distractions!

SP


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Post 2

Dmitri Gheorgheni - Not Banned in China

smiley - rofl The measure of how funny this is: I choked on my sandwich when I got to the word 'glint'.

Thanks for the wry observation.


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Post 3

minorvogonpoet

smiley - laugh
Witty and well-observed.


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Post 4

aka Bel - A87832164

Absolutely wonderful. smiley - laugh

I'd like to have that for smiley - thepost, if I may?


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Post 5

sinnerman pfank

Evening

you may indeed - pleased to hear you liked it.

SP

N.B. needs a minor edit - may want to change "where" to "what" on second to last line - or, alternatively, change "Is" to "There's" on the last line

Personally, I think the latter works better


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Post 6

aka Bel - A87832164

smiley - cool

I agree, I think the 'where' is fine, and 'there' is better. smiley - ok


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Post 7

Post Team

Hi sinnerman, I'm delighted to say that your wonderful poem is now published in smiley - thepost.

You can find it at A66211175

smiley - bubbly

smiley - thepost
Bel


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Post 8

sinnerman pfank


thanks for your help Bel, very kind of you.

Sin


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Post 9

aka Bel - A87832164

The pleasure was all mine. smiley - smiley


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Post 10

Bluebottle

How come a poem that appears in smiley - thepost is now showing 'This Guide Entry has been hidden, because it contravenes our House Rules'smiley - huh

I propose Back to Entry as sadly the author has smiley - elvised.

<BB<


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Post 11

Vip

I can see it fine at https://h2g2.com/entry/A66211175 ?

smiley - fairy


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Post 12

Bluebottle

Yes, the version in smiley - thepost is still there, I just wondered why this original version has been hidden. As there's nothing here, there's little point in keeping it in the Writing Workshop, but fortunately smiley - thepost is unaffected.

<BB<


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Post 13

Vip

smiley - ok

P.S. You may end up with me poking my head in a few of these conversations, looks like I was subscribed to the AWW for the whole of the time I was away...

smiley - fairy


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Post 14

Bluebottle

You're more than welcome – I hope my dredging up old conversations isn't too annoying. There are some real gems in the AWW, but I'm only commenting on the ones that I think don't belong there as otherwise I'd create a giant muddle.

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