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Alternative Writing Workshop: A610967 - Human primitivity- the nightclub observations

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BernieFishnotes

Entry: Human primitivity- the nightclub observations - A610967
Author: BernieFishnotes - U182545

Written a while ago, and only recently put up for review!


A610967 - Human primitivity- the nightclub observations

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Spiff


Hiya, smiley - smiley

i guess we covered this in the other thread... although this one stands up quite well on its own too, smiley - smiley


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Post 3

a girl called Ben

*bumping (and presumably grinding) this up to the top of the list*

What was the other conversation, Spiff?

Ben


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SomeMuppet

I like this and bumping this up for others.

There are also 2 other companion pieces to this
A889239 and A977763

I had a good giggle at this one (remembering going to nightclubs as a 15 year old and hunting in packs)


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Post 5

J

You giggled? smiley - biggrin


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nadia

That last paragraph seems a bit skewed. There's the (I think) unintentional distinction between females and reasonably inteligent humans. Women are human too, honest!

Besides, it's not just the intelligent male who will be ignored in this environment. I could just as happily imagine a well dress though not over exposed woman of the intelligent persuasion being ignored by the neanderthal men.

smiley - orangefish


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Post 7

BernieFishnotes

I'm sorry, I didn't mean to say that women were not human. I'm writing this from a male perspective, so me view on these things is likely to be a bit skewed. Besides, I'm sure that when it comes to the end of the night, more intelligent people will be going home alone than foolish morons will.


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nadia

I don't think these are good enough.

Proposing a move.
N


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Spynxxx

Agreed and seconded


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Post 10

Bluebottle

Thirded - Back to Entry.

<BB<


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Post 11

SashaQ - happysad and 'slightly mad'

Fourthed


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