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Post 1

Devonseaglass

Entry: Flushed With Success - A60593088
Author: Devonseaglass-dsg - U13965605

Plumbing the depths.


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Post 2

Dmitri Gheorgheni - Not Banned in China

This is extremely informative, though low on humour.

I would advise that you either:

- remove the personal references and turn this into an entry for PR, with more information on the delightfully-named Mr Crapper, or

- be less informative, and make this funnier.

Making it funny would be hard - I have lived in old houses, and the subject of annoying toilet problems makes me grit my teeth. Been there, done that, ruined the t-shirt.


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Post 3

Devonseaglass

Thanks smiley - ok. Will try and make it funnier. Once the scars have healed.


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Dmitri Gheorgheni - Not Banned in China

smiley - laugh Now, *that* is a good line to use...smiley - whistle

Description of plumber, conversation with plumber? In dialect, perhaps?


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Post 5

minorvogonpoet

Dmitri is right. This is informative but a bit... dry doesn't seem the appropriate word somehow.smiley - smiley

There are various Edited Guide articles on toilets already, so if you could make it funnier and intend it for the AWW, that would be good.


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Post 6

Bluebottle

The Edited Guide can never have too many entries on toilets. I thought this had real FM potential.

<BB<


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Post 7

Dmitri Gheorgheni - Not Banned in China

Oh, why not? smiley - rofl You guys are really digging in there. We'll call you the Plumbers.


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