h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: LGBT+ Hidden Histories - A87941695
Author: SashaQ - happysad - U9936370

Here is a linktastic Entry inspired by this month's Create Challenge A87941082 - I'm not sure if it has quite the flavour I was hoping for, so I appreciate your feedback to improve it

Soo... hm. I'm not sure in fact.

I have the feeling there is too much general information without giving a 'complete' overview and on the other hand you give examples without telling much about them but mainly post links to other Entries.

Hm....it seems to me that a thesis is arising out of your survey that says, more or less, that pioneers in LGBTQ+ rights have made really important changes in society?

Maybe start with that as a bold statement, and group the survey around recognising these pioneers in their different spheres of activity?

Also, could you maybe frame this entry as a 'guide to the Guide' on the subject? It might serve as a template for more like this in other fields of interest.

Thanks Tav - you've put into words why this doesn't have the right flavour for my taste. That is very useful feedback for me to ponder

The Entry is currently only 691 words long, so I can afford to add more helpful words.

Thanks DG - that is also useful feedback to ponder

I've made a start on refocusing the Entry and will continue working through to make improvements

I've finished going through the Entry again, and I think it's getting there... What do you think to it now?

Here is an article that encapsulates what I had in mind with this Entry http://medium.com/@QSE/the-xx-xy-lie-our-social-construction-of-a-sex-and-gender-binary-4eed1e60e615 However, it is over 5,000 words (classed as a 20-minute read) so I think there is still scope for an h2g2 Entry.

Reading my Entry again, the flavour is still not right for what I had in mind, so I will think about how to add some seasoning...

I've taken another look at this and made more changes, so I think it has been improved - see what you think

I think it works very well. Good job!

Thank you

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