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his plan backfired

Post 1

ex-Rambling. Thingite. Dog. Pythonist. Deceased.

Very good! well written, first person narrative was very effectively done. good use of outside elements, like the waiter. never saw the surprise coming-that he was the one driving the other car in the accident he mentioned at the first part of the story. good, creepy irony to the ending. write more, pleeze?


his plan backfired

Post 2

Researcher 168963

smiley - blush
Thankyou very much.
When/if I write some more it'll be put here.
http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/A294833


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