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A554753 The British Train Experience

Post 1

Grandad Ugg Keeper & Minister of Distant Relatives {Greeblet} (Scout, Sub-Ed) [1+(7x5)+9-5+2 = 42]

This entry, I feel, is complete. I am willing to take any suggestions from people about it. Please read it.

http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/A554753

Thanks

Grandad Ugg Keeper of Distant Relatives smiley - wizard


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Post 2

Fizzabert

I think it might be nice to add a section in the middle about the sorts of problems that have occured after privatisation and what people should expect when travelling on a train journey (straight after the bit about who runs the trains). Then you could go on with the bit about games and what to pack as coping strategies following on from the problems. smiley - smiley

Other than that ... great!

smiley - starLizsmiley - star


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Grandad Ugg Keeper & Minister of Distant Relatives {Greeblet} (Scout, Sub-Ed) [1+(7x5)+9-5+2 = 42]

I have altered the entry to contain your suggestions.

Grandad Ugg smiley - wizard


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Post 4

Fizzabert

I like that! smiley - biggrin


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Post 5

Konrad (1x6^(9-8)x(8-1)=42) (OMFC) (Goo at work, alabaster at home)

smiley - cool

couple of things:

Thames trains covers more than just london - it runs regular services to just beyond newbury, and Oxford, and occassional ones as far as hereford - perhaps central south/thames valley would be a better description.

rule 2 at the end 'It is not their faults and they cannot help' - fault, not faults.

thats all I can find to criticise it one smiley - smiley
smiley - cheers
Konrad


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Post 6

Orcus

Hi Grandad Ugg - as I recall this was here before under another guise.

Dunno what you've done to it but its excellent now smiley - smiley

One slight criticism. Thameslink trains run from Bedford through London to Brighton so its not just London to South coast. I'm from Bedford and we always used Thameslink to get to London. Bedford is 50 miles north of London smiley - smiley

Orcus

(smiley - silly trivia fact - there used to be an intercity service from Befdord to St Pancras London - it was affectionally known as the Bedpan line smiley - smiley)


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Grandad Ugg Keeper & Minister of Distant Relatives {Greeblet} (Scout, Sub-Ed) [1+(7x5)+9-5+2 = 42]

Thanks Orcus for that fact, I have added it to the entry and created you with it. I have altered the Thames Trains service routes and changed the minor grammatical error.

How is it now?smiley - erm

Grandad Ugg smiley - wizard


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Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese

'Befdord' should perhaps read 'Bedford' (sounds more british to German ears, but I could be wrong)

great entry smiley - ok

Bossel (Scout)


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Post 9

Grandad Ugg Keeper & Minister of Distant Relatives {Greeblet} (Scout, Sub-Ed) [1+(7x5)+9-5+2 = 42]

Oops I missed that. I have altered that now. Is that better?

Grandad Ugg smiley - wizard


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Post 10

Orcus

Gosh, thanks for that smiley - biggrin


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Post 11

Orcus

Ummm, Thameslink still says it runs from London to the South Coast smiley - erm

As I said it runs from Bedford at its northern extreme, through Luton Harpendon etc through to Kings Cross Thamselink and then all the way to Brighton on the South coast. It was the snailpace Thameslink service that replaced the Bedpan line (from Bedford at least). King Cross Thameslink is only a short walk from St Pancras station.


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Grandad Ugg Keeper & Minister of Distant Relatives {Greeblet} (Scout, Sub-Ed) [1+(7x5)+9-5+2 = 42]

Take a look now. I don't live near London, the South Coast or Bedford, so I don't use Thameslink Trains! I travel on Central ones!

Grandad Ugg smiley - wizard


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Post 14

NexusSeven

Yep, this entry's Guide-bound! smiley - smileysmiley - bubbly

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Keep up the good work! smiley - ok


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