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Peer Review: A54392826 - The Most Important Building in Shropshire and Arguably the World

Post 1

LL Waz

Entry: The Most Important Building in Shropshire and Arguably the World - A54392826
Author: LLWaz - U123301

A joint effort from me and Pinniped.

The Flax Mill was on my drive to work for 14 years. I got pretty attached to it, so I owe Pin for getting most of the construction of this done, leaving me to do just a bit of painting and decorating and topping it off.

Buildings like this one should not be allowed to just decay!

Hopefully this is EG-able.


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Post 2

Pinniped


Nice job, Wazsmiley - ok


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Post 3

aka Bel - A87832164

Mills are fascinating, and this one seems to be quite special. Haven't read it all yet, though, it's a little late now. I'll be back. smiley - ok


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Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

This is really nice.smiley - smiley Interesting addition to the body of knowledge, here, definitely EG-worthy.

A quibble, perhaps: In the third paragraph, you refer to 'a disused factory that was built in 1797'. Now, I know what it means, but it's a little confusing, since it was not built as a disused factory.

Reword, perhaps?


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Post 5

h5ringer

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Absolutely right LLW (and Pin). Thank you for bringing it to our attention smiley - ok


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Post 6

bobstafford

Well done wonderful I want to go and see it now...


Thanks for this entry both of you smiley - applause


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Post 7

elekragheorgheni

This is a terrific entry! It is well researched and incorporates the human, personal elements as well as the historical factoids. You guys did a great job. I hope that you can use a picture of it for the front page when it comes up. smiley - smiley


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Post 8

LL Waz

Thanks all smiley - smiley, glad you liked the Mill.

Bob, I've never been inside - I want to see that for real.

Researching the Mill I read that many of the fixtures and fittings in the Apprentice houses were intact when the Malting ceased in 1997. They've been removed, broken, set on fire since. Such a waste.

Slight rewording, just for you Dmitri smiley - winkeye. I prefer the reworded version, so thanks for quibbling.


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Post 9

aka Bel - A87832164

I've finally made it to come back and read it all. smiley - smiley

It solved the riddle about Pin's current tagline.

What a fascinating building. smiley - bigeyes

Good entry.

Just two small nitpicks:

>>The Ditherington Fax Mill has been referred to as an expression of Enlightenment Thinking4 and even in the 'the most flourishing town in England'<<

I like the idea of a Fax mill smiley - winkeye and you have two times 'the' in here. smiley - ok


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Post 10

J

Read this a while ago, but only just remembered to comment on it now that B'El had bumped it up. I'm in a very architectural, constructive mood this week, working on an entry about a particular structure myself.
I liked this one. I think you're stretching the building's importance a bit, from what I read. But hell, what's the point of writing an entry unless you're going to 'build' up your subject a bit? The title is excellent, by the way.

Always a pleasure to see you writing, Waz smiley - hug. And Pin, too, of course... most of the time. smiley - winkeye


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Post 11

LL Waz

Thanks both.

Fixed those Bel. My father had a fax mill - at least he had a machine that span out lots of fax smiley - run

Jordan, not convinced! I'm shocked!

Actually these claims are always a bit chicken and eggish. All you can do is make a case - like the title says.


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Opticalillusion- media mynx life would be boring without hiccups

Brilliant smiley - applause


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lil ~ Auntie Giggles with added login ~ returned


Well done! smiley - applause


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bobstafford

Well done excllent smiley - applause


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Post 16

J

Very good and all that smiley - smiley


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Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

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Post 18

LL Waz

Oh good! smiley - smiley


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aka Bel - A87832164

And it's on the FP today. smiley - bubbly


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