A Conversation for Saluki Dogs

Peer Review: A526510 - Saluki Dogs

Post 1

Tex

Entry: Saluki Dogs - A526510
Author: Tex - U136706

I've written this quite a while back, but would like to submit it for review. Thanks for your consideration.


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Post 2

Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences

how about a physical description of the breed- you know, height, colourations, sahpe, tail etc?


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Post 3

J'au-æmne in Review Fora

smiley - smiley Nice entry

I agree that a description of the breed would improve it smiley - smiley


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Post 4

Titania (gone for lunch)

I agree - I know what a Saluki looks like - but the average reader might not...


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Post 5

Zarquon's Singing Fish!

Hi Tx!

No response from you so far to the excellent suggstions made here.

Will you be making amendments?smiley - smiley

If there's no response, this entry will slide down into the Flea Market, which would be rather a shame.

Do post to let us know what your intentions are.

smiley - fishsmiley - musicalnote


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Post 6

Zarquon's Singing Fish!

Hi Tx!

No response from you so far to the excellent suggstions made here.

Will you be making amendments?smiley - smiley

If there's no response, this entry will slide down into the Flea Market, which would be rather a shame.

Do post to let us know what your intentions are.

smiley - fishsmiley - musicalnote


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Post 7

Wayfarer -MadForumArtist, Keeper of bad puns, Greeblet with Goo beret, Tangential One

instead of a description, you could put[a link to] a picture, you might take a photo of your own so as not to deal with messy copyright issues.(sadly we can't have our own pics in h2g2 yet so it would have to be a link. it might be blobbed later though.)


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Post 8

Ashley



Hey Tex,

This is a great entry and having read this Conversation, I went on a hunt for a picture of the Saluki and came up with this:

http://www.akc.org/breeds/recbreeds/saluki.cfm

It's from the American Kennel Club and is a page devoted to the breed.

Hope this helps. smiley - smiley


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Post 9

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Post 10

Wayfarer-- I only wish I were crackly

*waves*
smiley - bubblysmiley - biggrin
hope that that would answer any uestions you have, but if not, feel free to ask.smiley - smiley


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