A Conversation for Texas Bock Beer

A492446 - Texas Bock Beer

Post 1

Administrator-General (5+0+9)*3+0

Here's an entry I've had ready since before the Guide went down, available for comment.

http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/A492446


A492446 - Texas Bock Beer

Post 2

Sam

Again, a great little snippet of Texan info that arguably meets all the criteria of an Edited Guide entry, but (and this is where I justify my reputation as a pain in the ass) I felt that it was two paragraphs too short. Please consider adding a little more information (mention perhaps a couple of your favourite places that do a good trade in this kind of beer, how to get there, prices, etc) and then I think we've got ourselves a neat, compact Texan Entry. Incidentally, one of the Editorial team is flying out to Texas for a holiday in a couple of weeks - so the more info we get, the better!

Samsmiley - smiley


A492446 - Texas Bock Beer

Post 3

Administrator-General (5+0+9)*3+0

Thanks for the input; I'll give it a shot. But almost every place in Texas sells this stuff. To get to Texas, one can simply pick an American Airlines flight at random; it'll probably go to Dallas/Fort Worth eventually.


A492446 - Texas Bock Beer

Post 4

xyroth

http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/F48874?thread=107672 contains a definition of what bock beer is, and might therfore be worth linking to.


A492446 - Texas Bock Beer

Post 5

Administrator-General (5+0+9)*3+0

Got it, thanks. (The aforementioned article also contains a definition of what a certain hill in Bavaria is, but oh well.)


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