A Conversation for Fifth Avenue and Central Park South, New York City, USA

Peer Review : A48926811 - Fifth Avenue and Central Park South, New York City, USA

Post 1

Leo

Entry: Fifth Avenue and Central Park South, New York City, USA - A48926811
Author: Leo - relearning the rudiments of vacation - U519437

Answering GB's call for entries, here's one about my favorite NYC intersection.


A48926811 - Fifth Avenue and Central Park South, New York City, USA

Post 2

AlexAshman


This looks good smiley - ok just some quick things I've noticed:

Scholar’s Gate --> Scholar's Gate
(remove the evil MS Word apostrophe)

If you arrive at 7:30 in the morning
--> 7.30 in the morning

"Giggleswick, Yorkshire", or "Muggles for Magical Integration."
--> need 'single quotes'

However, you can watch store personnel demonstrated toys admire others that aren't sold in your local shop.
--> something not quite right with this sentence.

Even if you're a Linux geek
-->Even if you're a Linux geek

Alex smiley - smiley


A48926811 - Fifth Avenue and Central Park South, New York City, USA

Post 3

Opticalillusion- media mynx life would be boring without hiccups

That does it I'm planning my next trip smiley - handbag Seriously this is a great Entry and with a bit of spit and polish it will make a good addition to the Guide.

Here are some nitpicks smiley - biro

Is that a word <>?

<> In my mind it's either one or the other not both

Can we have a link to this story perhaps

<< with a fountain in middle>> I think you are missing the word ‘the’

Be careful with American spelling <> should be centre and amphitheatre is not <>.

Who is General Sherman? Why there? Please elaborate

Is there a measurement equivalent to 18 miles? If so put that in brackets next to it

Forget double quotation marks and use single ones instead

<>

I think you are missing the word 'a' next to 'keyboard'.

You may also like to put in some links

smiley - goodluck


A48926811 - Fifth Avenue and Central Park South, New York City, USA

Post 4

Websailor

The hansom cab is the horsedrawn forerunner of our black cabs Opti, and perfectly correct. They are used as a tourist attraction.

And amphitheater (American) should read amphitheatre (English)

Websailor smiley - dragon


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Post 5

Leo

smiley - ta
Any more?


A48926811 - Fifth Avenue and Central Park South, New York City, USA

Post 6

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

Wonderful Leosmiley - ok

Must be smiley - whistletime I reckonsmiley - whistle

GB
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Post 8

lil ~ Auntie Giggles with added login ~ returned


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Well done!

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Post 9

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

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GB
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Post 10

Websailor

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Post 11

AlexAshman


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Opticalillusion- media mynx life would be boring without hiccups

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