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Feedback on this topic would greatly appreaciated, thanks

It would be much easier to read if you had consistent formatting with the paragraphs and section titles.

Also, it seems to be just a collection of thoughts on sandwich making. It would have a much greater chance of being recommended if it were assembled into an article, with an introduction, body, and conclusion. Writing in complete sentences would help as well.

Furthermore, please be consistent in spelling "sandwich."

Wampus

On a more personal note, the statement that "cheese is the most important part of the sandwich" is completely opinionated. I personally don't like cheese, and have never had a sandwich that contained cheese.

Ignore Wampus - he's just in denial - cheese *IS* the most important part of a sandwich...
(except for the sauce, maybe...)

Ideally this entry needs to be in the third person, apart from that it is a good read and I intend to try out its ideas and suggestions. And for what my two pennies are worth, cheese doesn't make a sandwich. Cheese with sandwich pickle does

Croz (scout)

Not on an Egg Mayo and bacon sandwich it doesn't! Or on a salmon and cucumber sandwich. Or... I could go on.

Perhaps the article should be renamed "How to make a ham and cheese sarnie"?

Spirit.

This Conversation has been sin-binned because there's another up-to-date link in Peer Review - so it'll still get reviewed.

Editorial Note: This conversation has been moved from 'Peer Review Sin Bin' to 'Advanced Sandwich Making Tactics'.

Back to Entry - this article has potential, but there are Edited Entries on this topic, such as A144299 Sandwich