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Lowlands is becoming one of the biggest rock festivals in Europe. This entry gives the lowdown on this years edition

Hi Ernaets,

I was please to see this - I always look out for Dutch-related entries because I lived there for 3 years!

Anyway, it's a subject lots of people would be interested in. I think the main thing is that you should have more confidence to fill out your points - there's no limit on space, so long as it's interesting!

So, can you tell us more about the stand-ups, ballet or films? Are the comedians all Dutch, or do some come from Britain or America?
- Whereabouts is Biddinghuizen? Near any big cities, or in one of the rural provinces? Is the festival in a farmer's field, or attached to a country estate of a wealthy family, or where?
- Did you notice any new bands this year who might follow Krezip and make it big?

You don't have to answer exactly those questions, but asking yourself those kinds of thing might help you to fill out the detail. Then it will go from being a good article, to one which simply *must* go into the Edited Guide!

GVI

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