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FordsTowel Posted Aug 1, 2008
That's MUCH more clear! 
Thanks!
However, #14 seems to have picked up an errant bullet!
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Cyzaki Posted Aug 1, 2008
I'm not sure what's going on with your guideml, the numbered parts are in blue and very hard to see (in goo at least) - maybe they should be subheaders?
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FordsTowel Posted Aug 1, 2008
Cyzaki:
They look great in alabaster, but I'm sure that the colour was added to make them stand out as edited portions; and that they'll come out in normal text when the entry leaves PR.
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Andy Posted Aug 1, 2008
Right added some of them it will be Sunday possibly Monday before i add a bit more and finish it off
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U168592 Posted Sep 17, 2008
Is this all pumped up now? Or is there more to be done?
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Andy Posted Sep 29, 2008
Done sorry it has taken so long to finish 
Any more comments are welcome
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Cyzaki Posted Oct 15, 2008
You seem to have spaces between all your words and the following punctuation marks:
You've written like this ,
It should be like this.
There are other spelling and grammar niggles, a sub might be happy to sort those out though.
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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor Posted Nov 10, 2008
Hi Intern
There are still a lot of grammar, punctuation and style errors in your Entry 
There's blue colouring code which must be removed, and a spell-check will bring up things you can correct like elbo = elbow
Sentences must end with a full-stop, and punctuation should be next to the last word, with no gap: like this, and that! and the other; 
Intern
GB 
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Icy North Posted Nov 24, 2008
I reckon this is all there, and I'd be happy to sub-edit it if it were picked.
Icy
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