h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: Body Building - A38554554
Author: Intern ACE (Assistant Community Editor) - U191348

i Happen to think there is some thing missing from it but after sitting on it for 2 days i am still unsure as to what so i will throw it out there maybe some one will pick up on what i have missed if not then i think it must be

As a non builder can this be simplified a bit (a bit technical) Looks good though might even split into 2 or more entries if you want to get deeper into the subject

what would you like to see simplified and from where would you split it

Part 1 The bits of the body
Part 2 Getting fit amd building the body

Ok then
# Trapezius

The Trapezius Starts at the point behind your skull across the left hand side across the top of your shoulder and goes to bottom of the spine quarter of the way up from the bottom of the spine is the lower Trapezius.

1.what is a Trapezius, is only on the left, what is it doing and why
This sort of thing needs to be simplified with clear explanation (the big print version with pictures) so there is no doubt as what you mean.
Good entry though

you mean add there function as well Bob

Yes that will add interest and is there any M F difference as to the body building methods

i don't know i am a man Sounds like you think i cross dress and train on the weekend bob

There must be some differences even in Yorkshire between lads and the other sort you know them that makes the tea and such like

would you like me to explain it is that what this is all about bob don't be shy it's

Seriousley though you should consider the entry from both points of view.

Change of subject

well unfortunately i am not a woman and there gym is separate to ours so it would be just guess work and conjecture so unless i get a help from some one i cant write about what i don't know i might have to pass Bob

Ok so make this clear in the entry call it "Body Building for Chaps" or something like that...

Its a bit gender specific its not meant just for chaps there basic rules any one can follow

To me, it just looks a bit to convoluted to follow easily. It might help to reorganise it a bit.

You could try first numbered listing the 15 muscle groups, and then clarifying them one by one.

This would clear up all the disjointed bulleting.

It may be just me, but trying to follow it gives me a headache today.

Well FordsTowel has maybe said it better if more to the point

i will get onto it asap

I will look forward to the result this will be good I am sure of it

Done

I still don't understand the trapezius bit - do we only have a trapezius on the left side of our bodies?

Also, it might be a good idea to mention what each muscle does, which body part it moves.

Right i will re jig that bit as well