A Conversation for Castle and park Benrath (Schloss Benrath)

A37813232 - Castle and park Benrath (Schloss Benrath)

Post 41

aka Bel - A87832164

It doesn't make much sense as it stands, I suggest you add some explanation. smiley - smiley


A37813232 - Castle and park Benrath (Schloss Benrath)

Post 42

matodemi

I rather risk that it might be confusing, or being hold as mistake than to give the entry a direction that I didn't intend, Bel.


A37813232 - Castle and park Benrath (Schloss Benrath)

Post 43

aka Bel - A87832164

Entry: Castle and park Benrath (Schloss Benrath) - A37813232
Author: matodemi - U8020366

Then I guess the sub-ed should change it. Edited Guide Entries are meant to be understandable for the layman. I'm not quite sure why you can't add a footnote saying that Benrath used to be a town in its own right before becoming part of Düsseldorf.
I thought it was near Düsseldorf, not part of it.


A37813232 - Castle and park Benrath (Schloss Benrath)

Post 44

matodemi

it is part of Düsseldorf, which is even written in the entry (it became part of Düsseldorf in 1929...)


A37813232 - Castle and park Benrath (Schloss Benrath)

Post 45

aka Bel - A87832164

You are right. smiley - blush

I missed that when rereading it after all this time. Sorry.


A37813232 - Castle and park Benrath (Schloss Benrath)

Post 46

matodemi

Never mind, I even overhear words at work at the moment, when writing from tape (which is my job now... soon I'll be a medical expert smiley - winkeye )


A37813232 - Castle and park Benrath (Schloss Benrath)

Post 47

aka Bel - A87832164

Oh, good. smiley - puff


A37813232 - Castle and park Benrath (Schloss Benrath)

Post 48

matodemi

the bit about overhearing words - or the one about the medical expert? smiley - winkeye

(at least I do have a medical dictionary there, I am new on this subject, so quite often I don't know how to write what the doctors say - and I do understand even less)


A37813232 - Castle and park Benrath (Schloss Benrath)

Post 49

The H2G2 Editors

Is this one ready to go Matodemi? smiley - smiley


A37813232 - Castle and park Benrath (Schloss Benrath)

Post 50

matodemi

it is, yes....


A37813232 - Castle and park Benrath (Schloss Benrath)

Post 51

The H2G2 Editors

Cool smiley - ok


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Post 53

Malabarista - now with added pony

Bravo! smiley - biggrin


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Post 54

aka Bel - A87832164

smiley - applausesmiley - bubbly


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Post 55

matodemi

Thanks,
escpecially to Mala and Bel who have helped a lot....smiley - hug


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