A Conversation for Richard John Bayntun Hippisley (1865-1956)

Peer Review: A2964125 - Richard John Bayntun Hippisley (1865-1956)

Post 1

MikeMatt

Entry: Richard John Bayntun Hippisley (1865-1956) - A2964125
Author: MikeMatt - U569423

I'd like to submit my article on Richard John Bayntun Hippisley for Peer Review. Any comments welcome.

Mike


A2964125 - Richard John Bayntun Hippisley (1865-1956)

Post 2

Woodpigeon

Hi Mike,

This seems like a very interesting entry on an interesting man - my one main issue at this stage is that it is so short. Could you describe in more detail more about what he did, particularly during the war years? What more details can you provide to support why he won so many commendations?

Looking forward to learning more!

smiley - peacedoveWoodpigeon


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Post 3

Demon Drawer

I agree with both the above. This reads like an entry in Who's Who not an entry from Hootoo.


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Post 4

Dr Hell

smiley - whistle Are you still with us?

HELL


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Post 5

Mort - a middle aged Girl Interrupted

looks like a one stop researcher that has elvised anyway.

Back to entry?


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Post 6

GreyDesk

Yup.


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Post 7

Mort - a middle aged Girl Interrupted

Adding to list smiley - ok (just as soon as I think I am done, I find more!)


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