A Conversation for Galveston, Texas, USA.

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Post 1

third asst. eng.(deuce of clubs)

This is my First article in What I hope to be a longish set about port cities I visit in my capicity as a sailor. ANY remarks you have to the quality of the content and/or writing of this article would be greatly appriciated. Thank you.
p.s. This article has been submited for official acceptence, wish me luck smiley - smiley


questions, comments, snide remarks?

Post 2

John the gardener says, "Free Tibet!"

You're off to a good start, but you need to flesh it out a little... be more descriptive. If history and culture is significant, at least in your appreciation of the place, then tell about it. If the geography is the key thing, then describe the environment. If the city's relationship to the university is important, then give a little background about that. Try to give a sense of what it's like to live there.

I hope this is helpful. Give me a shout if it aint. smiley - winkeye

JTG


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