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Post 1

U168592

Entry: A Timely Intervention - (A Doctor Who Adventure) - A20109052
Author: Matt the Hoopy - U168592

A Dr Who Fan Fic that I knocked into shape for a recent comp. I never heard anything back so I thought I'd lob it in here and see what comments it brought. smiley - smiley

smiley - tardis


A20109052 - A Timely Intervention - (A Doctor Who Adventure)

Post 2

LL Waz

Tom Baker smiley - smiley?

Good dialogue, good pace. Feels like a set up to something important with a family line of Smiths.

Perhaps something I'd know if I knew more Dr Who? I've dipped in and out - missed a lot living on wrong continents.


A20109052 - A Timely Intervention - (A Doctor Who Adventure)

Post 3

U1250369



It *has* to be Tom Baker. He was a great doctor.

Good story, thank you for sharing.

The 'strong smell of ammonia' threw me. Did you mean that ?


A20109052 - A Timely Intervention - (A Doctor Who Adventure)

Post 4

U168592

I think I meant disinfectant. I'll change that. And yes, it's Tom Baker smiley - ok Thanks for the read. I think a bit of background knowledge of Who helps, definitely a fan piece smiley - smiley


A20109052 - A Timely Intervention - (A Doctor Who Adventure)

Post 5

Minorvogonpoet

This is good. Lots of good dialogue and the Dr Who character seems right. smiley - smiley


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Post 6

U168592

Thank you smiley - smiley


A20109052 - A Timely Intervention - (A Doctor Who Adventure)

Post 7

U1250369

Yes, disinfectant sounds better.

Ammonia smells remind me of old people's homes and geriatric wards.

The last hospital I visited smelled of stale food.

Gross smiley - biggrin


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