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Peer Review: A1903150 - Halloween III: The Season Of The Witch

Post 1

Bluebottle

Entry: Halloween III: The Season Of The Witch - A1903150
Author: Bluebottle: He's Back - And It's About Dinnertime - U43530

An article about the third in the Halloween series.smiley - pumpkin

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A1903150 - Halloween III: The Season Of The Witch

Post 2

J

"they're gonna kill all of us" --> 'they're gonna kill all of us'
"Invasion Of The Body Snatchers" --> 'Invasion Of The Body Snatchers'

They prefer ''s instead of ""s for some reason smiley - smiley

I don't think the first three headers are necessary. The title forms the first header. If it were me, I'd work the year it was released and the setting into the plot intro, and remove the Plot Header - because it's rather obvious that it's about the plot.

Just my smiley - 2cents

smiley - blacksheep


A1903150 - Halloween III: The Season Of The Witch

Post 3

caper_plip

Hi there!

'...such as the theft of Stonehenge and the allignment of the planets, are unneccessary...' - the alignment of the planets, are unnecessary...

'Although the least succesful in...' - successful in...

Caper Plipsmiley - artist


A1903150 - Halloween III: The Season Of The Witch

Post 4

Bluebottle

Okay - changes made. smiley - smiley (Why doesn't my 1983 word processing programme Leading Edge come with a spell checker? smiley - grr Does the company that made it still exist 20 years later? - Answers on a postcard!)

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Post 5

Cyzaki

You'll need to remove the picture - if one is required by the powers that be they'll comission a brand new one ready for the front page once it's been edited.

smiley - panda


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