A Conversation for Theatre Improvisation

A14590910 - Theatre Improvisation.

Post 21

rotundity

More typos - sorry!

You've got an infront instead of an in front, and I can still spot a definately - it's just after the wind and tumbleweed bit!
Arguements = arguments
You say laying down in a footnote, rather than lying down.
Finally, your last sentence should start "Remember to use" or "Remember - use" rather than just "Remember use"

Otherwise, brilliant entry. I really enjoyed it. smiley - ok


A14590910 - Theatre Improvisation.

Post 22

Aximili

Thanks, both of you. Bad keyboard skills and bad proofreading mean I usually miss typos. I am always grateful to people who point them out.


A14590910 - Theatre Improvisation.

Post 23

FordsTowel

A few more examples of games would be well received.

There are some with similar names. I prefer Bus Ride to Bus Stop, for example.

This description is taken from another web site, so it cannot be used without some research and a rewrite:

BUS RIDE
Ask for a volunteer bus driver or leader can take the role. Students are waiting at a bus stop. The bus driver picks up a passenger and when the passenger gets on the bus driver takes on the personality, mannerisms, dialect, etc. of the passenger. They have a short conversation in this manner, circling around once before picking up a new passenger. Each time a new passenger gets on the bus, the driver and all other passengers take on the persona of the new passenger and converse with one another in this mode until all passengers have been picked up.

In Bus Stop, there are always two players with the newest one trying to antagonise or intimidate the other to give up their seat and leave.

smiley - towel


A14590910 - Theatre Improvisation.

Post 24

The H2G2 Editors

Aximili, how you getting on with this? It's looking good! Nearly there, we reckon...


A14590910 - Theatre Improvisation.

Post 25

Aximili

Thanks for the support, Editors.


Congratulations - Your Entry has been Picked for the Edited Guide!

Post 26

h2g2 auto-messages

Your Guide Entry has just been picked from Peer Review by one of our Scouts, and is now heading off into the Editorial Process, which ends with publication in the Edited Guide. We've therefore moved this Review Conversation out of Peer Review and to the entry itself.

If you'd like to know what happens now, check out the page on 'What Happens after your Entry has been Recommended?' at EditedGuide-Process. We hope this explains everything.

Thanks for contributing to the Edited Guide!


Congratulations - Your Entry has been Picked for the Edited Guide!

Post 27

JulesK

smiley - bubbly Well done, Aximili! smiley - smiley


Congratulations - Your Entry has been Picked for the Edited Guide!

Post 28

Skankyrich [?]

smiley - applause Come and take your bow, Aximili!


Congratulations - Your Entry has been Picked for the Edited Guide!

Post 29

steve-paul ---- no lyrics!!<wah>

Although I haven't commented on this before, I think its an excellent piece, congrats smiley - applausesmiley - oksmiley - bubbly


Congratulations - Your Entry has been Picked for the Edited Guide!

Post 30

rotundity

Congrats! smiley - ok Good entry well chosen!

Look forward to seeing it on the front page!


Congratulations - Your Entry has been Picked for the Edited Guide!

Post 31

Aximili

Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you all! smiley - bubbly for everyone!


Key: Complain about this post

Write an Entry

"The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy is a wholly remarkable book. It has been compiled and recompiled many times and under many different editorships. It contains contributions from countless numbers of travellers and researchers."

Write an entry
Read more