A Conversation for Chocolate Body Paint

Peer Review: A13795464 - Chocolate Body Paint

Post 1

chocoholic

Entry: Chocolate Body Paint - A13795464
Author: Chocoholic's Delight Club - a hootoo club with a difference - U4288864

(I'm aka Emmily U190758)

something sweet to tickle your fancy smiley - smiley

CD/Em
smiley - choc


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Post 2

AlexAshman


Short but sweet smiley - ok

painting intrument --> instrument

While using an extra sheet is a good idea, it is also advisable to be (reasonably) tidy and not to go throwing the stuff everywhere. Cleaning up after yourself is never fun. As for removing chocolate from things - simply let it set (some say use ice to speed this up) and scrape off the excess, then wash using biological powder at at least 30. It makes little difference what type of chocolate is stuck to the sheets - it all comes off with proper washing powder. (EG entry on Stain removal = A512281 )

Alex smiley - smiley


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Post 3

the_jon_m - bluesman of the parish

hi, wounders if the first sentence will get past the editorial policy


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Post 4

AlexAshman


Yep - that is a point. How about 'various parts' instead?


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Post 5

Sho - employed again!

nothing to add...

(except that my offer to do Murials for Chocolate Body paint was never taken up smiley - wah)


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Post 6

chocoholic

smiley - cheers all smiley - smiley

I've corrected the type, and added the 'stain' link, along with a few more links. I'll leave the suggestive first sentence as it is for now. smiley - oksmiley - smiley

CD/Em
smiley - choc


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Post 7

Sho - employed again!

isn't there something to do with endorphin release when eating smiley - choc and when having sex? That's a legitimite connection in my book


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Post 8

Emmily ~ Roses are red, Peas are green, My face is a laugh, But yours is a scream

Jon & Alex, where are your minds lads. smiley - smiley

There's lots of erotically sensitive parts of both the male and female body, other than the one you may have been thinking of...typical males, thinking only of their own enjoyment smiley - tongueincheeksmiley - jester

Emmily
smiley - bluebutterfly


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Post 9

Emmily ~ Roses are red, Peas are green, My face is a laugh, But yours is a scream

simpost - I think they meant the sentence above that Sho smiley - oksmiley - smiley

Interesting that only the males see any harm in the suggestive sentence. smiley - whistle

Emmily
smiley - bluebutterfly


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Post 10

AlexAshman


I was thinking more that, since the guide is UK-based, there's no need to make it absolutely obvious where it's best to put the stuff. And I am aware of more than one 'place' - to be honest it's the females who claim there are only seven places who are narrow-minded... smiley - tongueout


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Post 11

the_jon_m - bluesman of the parish

female list of man's places they find erotic ...

wallet
credit card
cheque book ...

(gets coat and runs very very fast !!!)


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Post 12

Gnomon - time to move on

I like this Entry and think it should have no problems being picked. It's just the right length and tells us what we need to know.

smiley - ok


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Post 13

chocoholic

Thank You Gnomon smiley - smiley

CD/Em
smiley - choc


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Post 15

Wyatt


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Post 16

chocoholic

smiley - cheers WB, have some smiley - chocsmiley - smiley

CD/Em
smiley - choc


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Post 17

U168592

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Post 18

aka Bel - A87832164

Well done, Emmily smiley - choc


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Post 19

Sho - employed again!

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Post 20

AlexAshman

smiley - tongueoutsmiley - choc

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