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Post 1

AlexAshman

Entry: On The Subject Of Pie - Index - A13419434
Author: AlexAshman ['some people might get some pleasure out of hate - me I've enough already on my plate'] - U566116


Here's something I just felt like writing - I've only done two and a half chapters done at around a thousand words per chapter, and I've started wondering if it's worth writing any more. What do you reckon?

Alex smiley - smiley


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U1250369

Alex, Chapter 1 was a fun read.

If you've enjoyed writing 'On The Subject' then carry on until you get bored.

I'll save chapters 2 & 3 for later smiley - smiley


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Post 3

AlexAshman


Oh good - I'll keep at it for a bit longer then smiley - cheers


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Post 4

U1250369

smiley - laugh You do that


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Trin Tragula

>>I'll keep at it for a bit longer then<<

What happens next? What happens next? smiley - boing

Enjoyed that very much smiley - ok


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Post 6

AlexAshman


smiley - biggrinsmiley - cool

"What happens next?" - I'm not really sure... At the moment John's just made it onto his bicycle, and he's going somewhere which will have people in it, so that means a new setting and new characters smiley - headhurts


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Post 7

U1250369

Alex ! Steady on. Remember I've not got past chapter 1smiley - biggrin


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Post 8

AlexAshman


Oops smiley - blush No more spoilers then.


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Post 9

U1250369

Hehe

I'm back...chapter 2.

I really liked the way you did the phone convo in chapter 1smiley - run


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Post 10

U1250369

Ch 2 done and dusted

Loads of characters, I'm having to concentrate really hard smiley - bigeyes


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Post 11

U1250369

Part 3 done. Very funny. Is there a duck as well as a swan smiley - run


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Post 12

AlexAshman


Nope - that was me accidentally putting duck instead of swan - fixed it now smiley - ok

As for there being lots of characters - there's only five main ones so far...


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Post 13

U1250369

Cedric, John, Mrs Whatsit, the two demonities

Sorry, I was counting the swan and the owlsmiley - erm


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Post 14

AlexAshman


But Cedric is the swan smiley - erm Any idea how I can make that more obvious? smiley - erm


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Post 15

U1250369


Read part 1 again. Silly mesmiley - blush



It's perfectly clear.


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Post 16

AlexAshman


Well I did add the line 'Everybody liked swans' to clarify things - and I'll try not to call poor old Cedric a duck from now on smiley - blush


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Post 17

U1250369


smiley - laugh Sorry. I'm not really such a nit picker


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Post 18

AlexAshman


smiley - biggrin S'okay

I've just put the finishing touches to part three and I'm working on part four.


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Post 19

U1250369


I'll save it for a treat later in the week

No spoilers pleasesmiley - smiley


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Post 20

AlexAshman


smiley - blush Ok, I won't say anything. Honest. Except that I'm hoping to have parts five and six done by then.


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