A Conversation for The Seymour Arms, Plymouth, Devon, UK
Writing Workshop: A1119034 - The Seymour Arms
Ferrettbadger. The Renegade Master Started conversation Jul 22, 2003
Entry: The Seymour Arms - A1119034
Author: Ferrettbadger - U234614
My second attempt, anyone care to comment?
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malcster Posted Jul 23, 2003
i prefer the elburton hotel myself, the main reason is because they have a far superior Sunday league football side. As well as some stunning barmaids!!!!
The food and drink are not either!!!
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Ferrettbadger. The Renegade Master Posted Jul 24, 2003
Any other suggestions.
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Z Posted Jul 27, 2003
It's a good entry!
well written and easy to understand, if you're planning on submitting it to Peer Review then according to the writting guidelines then it needs to be in third person. So for instance,
"Many people think that this is the greatest pub in..."
A1119034 - The Seymour Arms
Ferrettbadger. The Renegade Master Posted Jul 27, 2003
Thank you, I will get it ammended into the third person, however I am wainting for some factual info (such as prices) before submitting it to peer reveiw, cheers for the feedback
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Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese Posted Jul 27, 2003
It wouldn't be of great use to add prices anyway. Edited Entries are meant to stay put for a good while, and it would be laborous to update them each time the prices are changed (or, ahem, once the UK joins the Euro community 
)
Instead, how about comparing it to its competitors, along the lines of 'it's more expensive|cheaper than the X or the Y, but the value for the money is okay|could be better|somesuch'. Well I notice that this is already there 
Off to PR, I'd say!
Bossel
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Ferrettbadger. The Renegade Master Posted Jul 28, 2003
Fair enough, off to PR it is then! Thanks.
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Writing Workshop: A1119034 - The Seymour Arms
- 1: Ferrettbadger. The Renegade Master (Jul 22, 2003)
- 2: malcster (Jul 23, 2003)
- 3: Ferrettbadger. The Renegade Master (Jul 24, 2003)
- 4: Z (Jul 27, 2003)
- 5: Ferrettbadger. The Renegade Master (Jul 27, 2003)
- 6: Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese (Jul 27, 2003)
- 7: Ferrettbadger. The Renegade Master (Jul 28, 2003)
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