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Peer Review: A1116055 - Greenbank Wanderers, Sunday League Football Team.

Post 1

Ferrettbadger. The Renegade Master

Entry: Greenbank Wanderers, Sunday League Football Team. - A1116055
Author: Ferrettbadger, back at work now, but still no PC at home. - U234614

Right,

At the second time of trying, I think this is ready for peer review now.

I do not think I will make any significasnt changes to the text, However please feel free to make suggestions anyway.


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Post 2

Mu Beta

It's a cracking good read, this. smiley - ok

And if Jimi X can write entries about his local golf courses, I see no reason why the Edited Guide shouldn't accept one on a local football team. smiley - biggrin

My only consternation is that it's very time-specific. If this is still in the Edited Guide this time next year, it will quite likely be a bit out-of-date. You'd need to keep an eye on it, and update it as appropriate and, as I've discussed elsewhere, our updating system for EG entries is not always the best.

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Post 3

Ferrettbadger. The Renegade Master

I know, I have tried to make it as timeless as possible.

As we are a group of mates, it is unlikely that the playing staff will change all that much and Me and Rik intend to run the team for years to come. So any changes are likely to be superficial and cosmetic (the odd player changing from year to year). I suppose minor changes like that might not be too dificult every couple of years?

Anyhow thanks for the positive feedback I enjoyed writing the article smiley - biggrin!


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Post 4

Mu Beta

OK - The Editors don't have much objection to minor changes being made through <./>Feedback-Editorial</.>, so that should be fine.

Are you sure Ralph Wiggum is a pyromaniac? I don't remember him setting fire to anything. smiley - erm

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Post 5

Ferrettbadger. The Renegade Master

Yes, a leprachaun tells him to burn things in one episode. Also occasional references are made to this in other episodes, 'fraid I am a bit of a simpsons geek smiley - smiley!


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Post 6

Mu Beta

OK, I'm an amateur Simpsons geek, and I do remember said episode now you mention it.

I'm still not sure that it's the way most people would picture him, though. smiley - smiley

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Post 7

Ferrettbadger. The Renegade Master

Hmmm, I see your point but it is my personal fav. Ralph Wiggum thing; so it is going to stay in there.


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Post 8

Mu Beta

I won't argue. It's your entry. smiley - winkeye

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Post 9

Ferrettbadger. The Renegade Master

Cheers Mate smiley - ok


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Post 10

McKay The Disorganised

I think this is there now.

smiley - ok


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Post 11

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I'm glad to see this in Peer Review again. smiley - smiley I can't think of any major comments to say, although I think that the History section should be moved further up.

Niwt smiley - cheers


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Post 12

Ferrettbadger. The Renegade Master

Thanks for the feedback folks smiley - ok


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Post 13

Number Six

Going well - one thing that would really help the Sub-Ed out (assuming this gets picked, as I hope it will!) is if you could make all your GuideML tags upper (rather than lower) case. There's some sort of technical reason for this that's been explained to me, but I seem unable to remember the exact details...

Also, I think your stories would look good if put inside a tag.

By the way, a handy tip - if you use the Brunel skin to edit with, there are handy buttons at the top of the editing window that you can use to put in the GuideML tags semi-automatically - highlight a paragraph, click on a button and you'll see what I mean.

smiley - mod


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Post 14

Ferrettbadger. The Renegade Master

Is the format of the guide code better now?


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Post 15

emlar

looks good to me

smiley - silly


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Post 16

emlar

oops.... smiley - ok


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Post 17

emlar

"we are actually the Seymours football team"

just noticed this... not sure if it should say 'we' for an edited guide thingy... but ive not been here for too long myself, so as i said, im not sure.

smiley - silly


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Post 18

Ferrettbadger. The Renegade Master

Thanks for the feedback smiley - ta

Do you think it reads better now?


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Post 19

emlar

yuppers smiley - smiley

smiley - silly


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Post 20

Ferrettbadger. The Renegade Master

smiley - biggrin


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