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Writing Workshop: A1116055 - Greenbank Wanderers

Post 1

Ferrettbadger. The Renegade Master

Entry: Greenbank Wanderers - A1116055
Author: Ferrettbadger - U234614

Hi this is my first attempt at writing an entry, so I thought I would choose one close to my heart. What do people think? How do you think I could improve it? Hope to hear some good feedback soon.


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Post 2

Diddy!

hi im a relative newcomer so im not sure what it is h2g2 likes on this sort of thing. me personally i woudl like to know a bit more about the history of the club. how long has it run for, what trophies have (not!) got etc etc. theres a few spelling mistakes as well but im on a digibox so its hard for me to pn them all out for you.
apart from that not bad! you might get a load more relies telling you what it is h2g2 like on this sort of thing but i couldnt tell you any! smiley - sorry

Diddy!


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Post 3

Ferrettbadger. The Renegade Master

Hi Diddy thanks for the feedback, On that basis I have added an extra paragraph, Is that the sought of thing you were driving at?

I must confess spelling is not my strong point so could you tell me what exactly I have spelled wrong? Cheers buddy smiley - smiley.


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Post 4

malcster

i think you could include a full match rundown of the 5-3 loss against the mighty Elburton Hotel as the higlight of your teams season!!!


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Post 5

Ferrettbadger. The Renegade Master

What you mean when fumbled Glenn's shot and threw the ball into the ne?


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Post 6

malcster

I know!!!

Tookey won't let me forget in a hurry!!!

I blame it on the terrential winds at staddy on that fateful morning/afternoon.


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