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Peer Review: A1083467 - Puroresu: Pro Wrestling Japanese Style

Post 1

Mat Lindsay (the researcher formerly known as Nylarthotep...now he has a name, all he needs is a face)

Entry: Puroresu: Pro Wrestling Japanese Style - A1083467
Author: Nylarthotep - U200240

Heads up, grapple fans...


A1083467 - Puroresu: Pro Wrestling Japanese Style

Post 2

There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho

It's been a long night in PR and my head is swimming smiley - headhurts after having read dozens of entries and commented in some detail on a few of them. It's a damn shame then that I've discovered this little gem as I'm about to log off for the night, so I'm doing no more for now than pushing it to the top of the PR list in the hope that it'll get some attention.

Thank you and goodnight.

smiley - geeksmiley - online2longsmiley - stiffdrinksmiley - hangoversmiley - ok
Scout


A1083467 - Puroresu: Pro Wrestling Japanese Style

Post 3

Mat Lindsay (the researcher formerly known as Nylarthotep...now he has a name, all he needs is a face)

Thanks for the positive feedback. I'd been wondering if anyone had looked over this article, when no one comments after three weeks you start to get a little worried!


A1083467 - Puroresu: Pro Wrestling Japanese Style

Post 4

There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho

It happens sometimes that an entry slips in under the radar - there are so many new entries being submitted to PR every day that it's easy to miss one. If that happens, it's ok for the author to post a reminder after a couple of days, and if the thread gets going but then goes quiet again, you can do that once or twice a week (but any more frequently than that will get you some smiley - cross looks).

Anyways, I've got plentry of time to look at it today smiley - biggrin One thing I did notice was this "...none can claim to have nurtured a name who went on to be elected to the US congress". Well, that's true, but Jesse Ventura did make it to Governor of Minnesota. Not quite Capitol Hill but still a position of some political power.

smiley - geeksmiley - online2longsmiley - stiffdrinksmiley - hangoversmiley - ok
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A1083467 - Puroresu: Pro Wrestling Japanese Style

Post 5

There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho

Well, I've had a good read of the entire entry, and there's really very little I can see which is need of improvement smiley - smiley

Some typos:

chanpion - champion

homelonad - homeland

prestiege - prestige

traditionaly - traditionally

The paragraph about 'working tight' is rather unwieldy and not easy to follow. Can you think of a clearer way to explain what you're trying to get across there? I'm not getting it.

smiley - geeksmiley - online2longsmiley - stiffdrinksmiley - hangoversmiley - ok
Scout


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Post 6

Mat Lindsay (the researcher formerly known as Nylarthotep...now he has a name, all he needs is a face)

All done, Gosho old bean.


A1083467 - Puroresu: Pro Wrestling Japanese Style

Post 7

summerbayexile

Hi there,
As a former resident of Japan, and a lover of all things Nihon I was surprised that puroresu had eluded me. It's probably down to the fact that pro-wrestling in the UK and the US is such a joke. Honestly, a sport!!smiley - laugh Hulk Hogan and Big Daddy, I ask you!! Enough of that. If an inveterate hater of these overpaid cretins can read the article to the end and find the subject interesting you have more than done your job. It makes an interesting companion piece to my own EG entry on Sumo. I will recommend it forthwith smiley - biggrin
sbe


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Post 8

Sam

Subarashii! Picked desu ne!smiley - biggrin


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Post 10

summerbayexile

Congrats, really pleased its heading its way to the EG. Jozu desu ne!smiley - cheers kanpai, kanpai, kanpai
sbe


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There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho

Well done smiley - ok Really happy about this one getting into The Guide smiley - biggrin


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Post 12

Mat Lindsay (the researcher formerly known as Nylarthotep...now he has a name, all he needs is a face)

Sweet.

Thanks for the positive feedback.


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