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Mat Lindsay (the researcher formerly known as Nylarthotep...now he has a name, all he needs is a face) Started conversation Jun 19, 2003
Entry: Puroresu: Pro Wrestling Japanese Style - A1083467
Author: Nylarthotep - U200240
Heads up, grapple fans...
A1083467 - Puroresu: Pro Wrestling Japanese Style
There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho Posted Jul 16, 2003
It's been a long night in PR and my head is swimming after having read dozens of entries and commented in some detail on a few of them. It's a damn shame then that I've discovered this little gem as I'm about to log off for the night, so I'm doing no more for now than pushing it to the top of the PR list in the hope that it'll get some attention.
Thank you and goodnight.
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A1083467 - Puroresu: Pro Wrestling Japanese Style
Mat Lindsay (the researcher formerly known as Nylarthotep...now he has a name, all he needs is a face) Posted Jul 16, 2003
Thanks for the positive feedback. I'd been wondering if anyone had looked over this article, when no one comments after three weeks you start to get a little worried!
A1083467 - Puroresu: Pro Wrestling Japanese Style
There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho Posted Jul 16, 2003
It happens sometimes that an entry slips in under the radar - there are so many new entries being submitted to PR every day that it's easy to miss one. If that happens, it's ok for the author to post a reminder after a couple of days, and if the thread gets going but then goes quiet again, you can do that once or twice a week (but any more frequently than that will get you some looks).
Anyways, I've got plentry of time to look at it today One thing I did notice was this "...none can claim to have nurtured a name who went on to be elected to the US congress". Well, that's true, but Jesse Ventura did make it to Governor of Minnesota. Not quite Capitol Hill but still a position of some political power.
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A1083467 - Puroresu: Pro Wrestling Japanese Style
There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho Posted Jul 16, 2003
Well, I've had a good read of the entire entry, and there's really very little I can see which is need of improvement
Some typos:
chanpion - champion
homelonad - homeland
prestiege - prestige
traditionaly - traditionally
The paragraph about 'working tight' is rather unwieldy and not easy to follow. Can you think of a clearer way to explain what you're trying to get across there? I'm not getting it.
Scout
A1083467 - Puroresu: Pro Wrestling Japanese Style
Mat Lindsay (the researcher formerly known as Nylarthotep...now he has a name, all he needs is a face) Posted Jul 18, 2003
All done, Gosho old bean.
A1083467 - Puroresu: Pro Wrestling Japanese Style
summerbayexile Posted Jul 22, 2003
Hi there,
As a former resident of Japan, and a lover of all things Nihon I was surprised that puroresu had eluded me. It's probably down to the fact that pro-wrestling in the UK and the US is such a joke. Honestly, a sport!! Hulk Hogan and Big Daddy, I ask you!! Enough of that. If an inveterate hater of these overpaid cretins can read the article to the end and find the subject interesting you have more than done your job. It makes an interesting companion piece to my own EG entry on Sumo. I will recommend it forthwith
sbe
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There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho Posted Jul 23, 2003
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Mat Lindsay (the researcher formerly known as Nylarthotep...now he has a name, all he needs is a face) Posted Jul 25, 2003
Sweet.
Thanks for the positive feedback.
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Peer Review: A1083467 - Puroresu: Pro Wrestling Japanese Style
- 1: Mat Lindsay (the researcher formerly known as Nylarthotep...now he has a name, all he needs is a face) (Jun 19, 2003)
- 2: There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho (Jul 16, 2003)
- 3: Mat Lindsay (the researcher formerly known as Nylarthotep...now he has a name, all he needs is a face) (Jul 16, 2003)
- 4: There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho (Jul 16, 2003)
- 5: There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho (Jul 16, 2003)
- 6: Mat Lindsay (the researcher formerly known as Nylarthotep...now he has a name, all he needs is a face) (Jul 18, 2003)
- 7: summerbayexile (Jul 22, 2003)
- 8: Sam (Jul 23, 2003)
- 9: h2g2 auto-messages (Jul 23, 2003)
- 10: summerbayexile (Jul 23, 2003)
- 11: There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho (Jul 23, 2003)
- 12: Mat Lindsay (the researcher formerly known as Nylarthotep...now he has a name, all he needs is a face) (Jul 25, 2003)
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