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Peer Review: A1050706 - Random Access Memory

Post 1

canismajor77 a.k.a. Master of the Paisley Llama

Entry: Random Access Memory - A1050706
Author: canismajor77 a.k.a. Master of the Paisley Llama - U217198

This should show up in GuideML form, but if not I hope you'll give me some slack smiley - smiley.


A1050706 - Random Access Memory

Post 2

SomeMuppet

Hi Canismajor,

Right there was a problem with the guideml in this article, which is why it appeared with all the ML tags in the document.

If you take a look at A1050931 (I will delete this entry once you have finished with it, so let me knowsmiley - winkeye)I have resolved the guideML problems, and Have suggested a title change to better distinguish this from the more commonly known Random Access Memory that is found inside the shell of a PC. Did you change the style from plain to guideml or did you just type the tags in?

As for the article itself, I thought it was quite a nice piece, but it didn't sell to me why I should go to this site. What possible benefits could be gained from going here, etc.

The what is it section describes the tabs you see as you go to the site, but perhaps this should describe the Ethos of the place, ie for those that want to share their memories.

Don't know if what I have said here makes a lot of sense but at least I know what I meant smiley - winkeye

Regards

KJsmiley - smiley


A1050706 - Random Access Memory

Post 3

Dr Hell

I would have expected an Entry explaining all about that silicon thingey in the innards of my PC.

I suggest a title change to 'Random Access Memory - the website' or 'Project'...

I also dunno how much of this is advertising and personal opinion...

My 2c

FF


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Post 4

canismajor77 a.k.a. Master of the Paisley Llama

Thanks for your help... I think it's fixed now, but I welcome your comments.


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Post 5

Dr Hell

Looking good...

I took a look at the website - seems really interesting.

Maybe you can also tell the reader who started RAM and when it started.

FF


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Post 6

There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho

It is indeed a fascinating website. I wonder what else could be added to the entry?

smiley - geeksmiley - online2longsmiley - stiffdrinksmiley - hangoversmiley - ok
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Post 7

Cyzaki

The author has left the building. Time for a move?

smiley - panda


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Post 8

J

Yup. It's a good entry, I think, but not complete yet. Needs work

Propose a move to FM?

smiley - blacksheep


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Post 9

There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho

Seconded. I'll mail it in.

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